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Faint barks, evening, wind, and rain
I'm standing outside these gates again
staring at her long twisted cobbled grey 
She'll be pleading and crying for me to stay
Teary-eyed,.. as I start to shake

You see, it's my witching mother
Changing eyes, I remember
Each day a day in mid-November
The whiskey called "screams," and her flaking skin

Unrepentant and filled to the neck with gin
she just sat there laughing at my nervous grin
Those vile remarks and the things she'd say
Throughout the evening of every day 

"you must stay with me forever, petals
or I will bloody you with this iron kettle."

I cannot push myself through these damn gates

The fear of the,.. known I suppose
those wretched toenails all overgrown
feet that stink of death
Old graveyard graves crooked amber teeth
My dear mother, it's quite clear I resent you so
Why do I still love you, you wicked old crow?
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Moore Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 1:04 PM
Whiskey called screams - is a very powerful line for those who have experienced it. We all have to decide what is acceptable and unacceptable behavior. You can love from a distance but with self-care.
Desk Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 2:01 AM
Thank you very much, Holly, for your wonderful comment, greatly appreciated, I love your poetry.
Rose  Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 4:52 PM
I love this one the best, your ending makes the heart jump, Have a nice evening dear poet, I am looking forward to more of your poetry
Desk Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 2:10 AM
Thank you very much, Pixie Dust, I greatly appreciate your comments, have a great day.
Carmack Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 11:40 PM
The bitter-sweet flavor of this, welcome to the soup Carl. I was blessed with a good mother, but my father was not. Old grandma has been in the ground for 25 years and no matter my Heaven or Hell, I suspect, I'll never see that woman again.
Desk Avatar
May 2, 2020 at 4:04 AM
Thank you very much for your welcome Rob, thank you for your poetry, certainly is an education, exceptional work.
Smith Avatar
April 18, 2020 at 7:12 AM
Love has many forms but if it is Love it remains even when we can not explain how it has survived. Great poem for me to read before bed even if extremely well penned. Will read more to see what else you have got. Stay safe and all the best from David in NZ
Desk Avatar
April 18, 2020 at 10:14 AM
Thank you very much for your beautiful comment, David. Greatly appreciated. Your poetry is wonderful I will be reading more in due course. Great work.
One Avatar
April 12, 2020 at 2:25 PM
I can understand your resentment.... Probably read a bit between the lines also... However she probably made you the person you are today, without realising.
Desk Avatar
April 12, 2020 at 2:56 PM
Ah ah, that's it, thank you for your counsel on this matter.
One Avatar
April 12, 2020 at 1:44 PM
Damn.... I'm sure she loves you deep down.... It's a difficult situation.. you write really well
Desk Avatar
April 12, 2020 at 2:06 PM
yes, you could be right, thank you for your comment.
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