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She came over today Didn’t have much to say I wanted her to stay Maybe some other day Russell Sivey

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Don Johnson

Date: 8/9/2011 7:50:00 AM

At east she came to bloody visit, lovely women sure are is it, bloody frog said ribbet .... guess ive lost the plot... sense of loss but still in the game mate! have 2 be in the game:)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/8/2011 10:32:00 PM

There is a sadness I sense in this poem, Russell. I hope everything works out for you and this special lady in your life. Thanks for your comments. Love, Carolyn

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/8/2011 8:46:00 PM

Says a lot with so few words. Love the verse Russell and thanks for your sweet visit.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/8/2011 3:14:00 PM

heartfelt till the end, russel! a beautiful sense of longing from your glittering pen..:) huggs, nette

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/8/2011 2:37:00 PM

Okay...Maybe another day will be better but she might just be a very quiet person...Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/8/2011 2:38:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by, your comments were uplifting..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/8/2011 10:31:00 AM

short and sweet ..directly to the point Russell.. keep wishing .. when time is right things happen luv.. great title...