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Visit to Heaven

I dreamed I went to heaven, And didn't even know... All that I knew was there was joy, In that place, where I did go. Joyful, I saw my sister, Barbara, there with me! Our sister Nancy pondered, Near a lovely Christmas Tree. I heard a voice in the next room, I hurried in...to stare... At brother, downward talking, To someone, who wasn't there. He was looking down and speaking, "Remember...?" This or that... And telling funny quips and jokes Upon old happenstance. I turned and asked my sister, "Who is he talking to?" For I was truly puzzled, I really had no clue. "He's speaking to his daughter." She casually replied, My voice then concerned whisper, "Oh my gosh, she hasn't died!?" She gave a little chuckle, Shaking her head, no, And gave me THAT big sister look... 'Oh, silly Betty Jo!' "But she's not here, she can't hear him." I spoke again, concerned. My brother paused from speaking, As to me he turned, "Yes, my daughter hears me." He emphatically replied, Then continued conversation... Had I but comprehended, His Heavenly abide. The next part of my dream, I walked most gleefully, Off to meet my father, And other family. Excited for to show them gifts Someone had given me, Three old-style fountain pens And three lovely golden keys. I looked back to look upon The house where I'd just left, A Large and lovely Palace Home On a hill without one cleft. Before me lay a grassy field with People everywhere! Strolling, resting, sitting, True Peace filled the atmosphere. A heavenly dream, Such joy and love, There dwelt no tear nor pains... I've wakened now, And yet, that dream In me, it still remains. I am certain, up in Heaven, Love has conquered death's Cold chains. Where Christ welcomes His Children, To His Kingdom, Where He reigns. 'For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life.' ~John 3:16 King James Version~ "...I go and prepare a place for you, I will come again and receive you to Myself; that where I am, there you may be also. 4 And where I go you know, and the way you know.” 5 Thomas said to Him, “Lord, we do not know where You are going, and how can we know the way?” 6 Jesus said to him, “I am the way, the truth, and the life. No one comes to the Father except through Me." ~John 14:3-6 New King James Version~ 'Wherefore seeing we also are compassed about with so great a cloud of witnesses, let us lay aside every weight, and the sin which doth so easily beset us, and let us run with patience the race that is set before us, 2 Looking unto Jesus the author and finisher of our faith; who for the joy that was set before him endured the cross, despising the shame, and is set down at the right hand of the throne of God.' ~Hebrews 12:1-2 King James Version~

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Date: 3/1/2024 9:20:00 AM
What a wonderful journey/write. Love It... Thanks for the added notes. "Please" write more... Have a blessed day as you write away....................
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Date: 2/25/2024 6:35:00 PM
Dear BJ, This is a breathtaking journey through realms of joy and love. Your dreamlike narrative unveils layers of familial connection and spiritual comfort, painting a vivid portrait of peace beyond earthly bounds. The imagery of reunion and celestial tranquility resonates deeply, reminding us of the enduring power of love and faith. Your words linger, echoing the promise of eternal embrace and the triumph of love over death. A blessed glimpse of heavenly grace with us. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 1/31/2024 10:58:00 PM
Such a beautiful, endearing write dear BJ. So well written. The poem flows gently and perfectly throughout. I love your thoughts and dreams and it is so comforting to read. ‘ love has conquered death’s gold chain’s - what a truly gorgeous line. I loved reading this from your delightful, caring heart dear BJ. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem full of hope. Hugs to you xx
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Date: 1/10/2024 1:54:00 AM
What a dream. God in his infinity is adored by the just and relations. We pray every day to emulate your visions. Well done. God bless.
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Date: 1/9/2024 6:47:00 AM
BJ, I am SO glad I read this beautiful piece today~~so descriptive, touching, reverent, and inspirational. Janice
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Date: 1/7/2024 10:10:00 PM
Your poem was very comforting and soothing to read, BJ. The scripture brought joy and peace to my heart and soul, for I know He's gone to prepare a place for me and you. Smiles and Blessing, my sister in Christ. Have a blessed 2024! Hugs, Bill
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Date: 1/7/2024 12:46:00 PM
Such a beauteous heavenly dream weaved into this wondrous poem, Bj. A huge FAVE. Have a splendid and restful Sunday. Warmest regards.
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Date: 1/7/2024 2:17:00 AM
What a lovely dream dear BJ. How exciting it must have been meeting your sister and your brother there in the place of bliss ! Reading this, one would never have even a trace of sorrow, but only pure joy. How I wish, I too get a similar dream and see my parents in Heaven. Both of them left this world in January.... my mother on 5th Jan and my father on 14th... if course in different years. I do think a lot about them these days. Stay blessed dear friend .
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Date: 1/6/2024 7:52:00 PM
Sure hope your dream comes true -- a long time from now, Bj. Stick around down here. You have more good to do here. ~ Gershon
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Date: 1/6/2024 7:22:00 AM
A heartfelt write About loved ones that we will see one day when the day comes. I often see my dad and my husband has even smelt the tobacco he used to smoke as he enjoyed his pipe. Yes I promise I will soupmail you as I am about to post my poem. A Lovely, thought felt write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/6/2024 6:57:00 AM
Words graceful resonating faith--contemplating love, and life, and heaven--beloved memories--dream or not. Splendidly done, BJ.
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Date: 1/6/2024 12:48:00 AM
BJ, I like this faith based one that you have shared with us. Those scriptures are so reassuring for Christians to read. I appreciate the time you spent preparing it because those are not easy to put to gather. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 1/5/2024 7:40:00 PM
I just love dreams like this, BJ. Your feel good write is very relatable to me and I'm sure to others as well. Dad and Barb are smiling :) Happy New Year! Charlie
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Date: 1/5/2024 7:20:00 PM
Such a lovely visit to heaven in a dream Betty. One day we’ll get there and be with those we’ve loved and lost, how wonderful it’s going to be eventually… Belle
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Date: 1/5/2024 3:40:00 PM
I appreciate you sharing your dream via your poetic lines--lines that captivated me. In my dreams, I, too, see my loved ones and am looking forward to one day see them again. Your poem was comforting, and I'm grateful for it. Have a splendid weekend, Sara
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Date: 1/5/2024 2:32:00 PM
Another great! I love this poetic view into heaven that you were blessed with. Thank you for sharing this dream. To have a glimpse into what awaits the believer in the here after really lifts my spirit. Keep writing great poems. I can't wait to read your next one. Have a happy and blessed 2024 BJ.
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Date: 1/5/2024 2:12:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem BJ... One day we will be reunited with our savior and our much beloved ones! I can't wait to go be with Him and family and friends that have passed through this earth. I believe it's going to be such a joyful and beautiful place and the thought of no more pain or tears is wonderful.. I hope you are doing well my friend and I hope and pray you have a very blessed New Year! ~Anna Kaianah
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Date: 1/5/2024 11:57:00 AM
Hello my friend so nice to see you posting again... This heartfelt and vivid poem beautifully captures the essence of a dream about heaven, resonating with themes of joy, family, and the promise of eternal love.. Its very personal to you and in my dreams, I also see loved ones who have left this world.. especially my dad, such a please to read you again..
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Date: 1/5/2024 10:10:00 AM
Dear BJ, I am utterly astounded by the sheer brilliance and enchanting quality of this poetic masterpiece. The exquisite beauty and vivid imagery displayed in this captivating dream leave me at a loss for words to adequately express my admiration. Wish you all the best in 2024
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Date: 1/5/2024 5:41:00 AM
Oh my Bj this completely grabbed my heart! What a magical, beautiful encounter with the ones you love who have left earth ….especially Barbara! I bet it gave you great comfort, connection and a peacefulness. I want to dream your dream!!! Haha…You wrote this straight from your beautiful loving heart and that shines throughout your poem! POTD for me!! Debx
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Date: 1/5/2024 12:14:00 AM
We all look forward to that day when your dream will become a reality for us all. Hope 2024 brings you good health and happiness BJ. Tom
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