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Visit to Heaven

I dreamed I went to heaven, And didn't even know... All that I knew was there was joy, In that place, where I did go. Joyful, I saw my sister, Barbara, there with me! Our sister Nancy pondered, Near a lovely Christmas Tree. I heard a voice in the next room, I hurried in...to stare... At brother, downward talking, To someone, who wasn't there. He was looking down and speaking, "Remember...?" This or that... And telling funny quips and jokes Upon old happenstance. I turned and asked my sister, "Who is he talking to?" For I was truly puzzled, I really had no clue. "He's speaking to his daughter." She casually replied, My voice then concerned whisper, "Oh my gosh, she hasn't died!?" She gave a little chuckle, Shaking her head, no, And gave me THAT big sister look... 'Oh, silly Betty Jo!' "But she's not here, she can't hear him." I spoke again, concerned. My brother paused from speaking, As to me he turned, "Yes, my daughter hears me." He emphatically replied, Then continued conversation... Had I but comprehended, His Heavenly abide. The next part of my dream, I walked most gleefully, Off to meet my father, And other family. Excited for to show them gifts Someone had given me, Three old-style fountain pens And three lovely golden keys. I looked back to look upon The house where I'd just left, A Large and lovely Palace Home On a hill without one cleft. Before me lay a grassy field with People everywhere! Strolling, resting, sitting, True Peace filled the atmosphere. A heavenly dream, Such joy and love, There dwelt no tear nor pains... I've wakened now, And yet, that dream In me, it still remains. I am certain, up in Heaven, Love has conquered death's Cold chains. Where Christ welcomes His Children, To His Kingdom, Where He reigns. 'For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life.' ~John 3:16 King James Version~ "...I go and prepare a place for you, I will come again and receive you to Myself; that where I am, there you may be also. 4 And where I go you know, and the way you know.” 5 Thomas said to Him, “Lord, we do not know where You are going, and how can we know the way?” 6 Jesus said to him, “I am the way, the truth, and the life. No one comes to the Father except through Me." ~John 14:3-6 New King James Version~ 'Wherefore seeing we also are compassed about with so great a cloud of witnesses, let us lay aside every weight, and the sin which doth so easily beset us, and let us run with patience the race that is set before us, 2 Looking unto Jesus the author and finisher of our faith; who for the joy that was set before him endured the cross, despising the shame, and is set down at the right hand of the throne of God.' ~Hebrews 12:1-2 King James Version~

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Date: 6/4/2024 9:56:00 PM
Great heavenly deam recounting here B J.' All blessings in Jesus.)
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 12/28/2024 4:55:00 PM
Blessings to you as well Joe! It was such a beautiful dream. I miss my loved ones so much. Barbara has been gone two years now, she was such a dear. Hopefully 2025 will be brighter than 2024 has been, at least to our family. I so look forward to the day our Lord returns, the dead will be raised in Him, and the thousand-year reign filled with peace and glory until He makes all things new. No more suffering, pain or heartache. God bless you Joe, in His name, Jesus, the name above all names! :)
Date: 3/1/2024 9:20:00 AM
What a wonderful journey/write. Love It... Thanks for the added notes. "Please" write more... Have a blessed day as you write away....................
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 12/28/2024 4:51:00 PM
Paula, you are so sweet, thank you so much. Please pray I can write more, my muse seems to have departed and only comes back for a brief kiss on the cheek and heads out for parts unknown! I haven't had a good year, and really pray 2025 is kinder. I hope you have been blessed! I read a poem you wrote in the new anthology and was truly blessed, it was beautiful. Be blessed in 2025 my friend <3
Date: 2/25/2024 6:35:00 PM
Dear BJ, This is a breathtaking journey through realms of joy and love. Your dreamlike narrative unveils layers of familial connection and spiritual comfort, painting a vivid portrait of peace beyond earthly bounds. The imagery of reunion and celestial tranquility resonates deeply, reminding us of the enduring power of love and faith. Your words linger, echoing the promise of eternal embrace and the triumph of love over death. A blessed glimpse of heavenly grace with us. - Blessings, Daniel
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 12/28/2024 4:47:00 PM
Thank you so much Daniel. I so appreciate your comment, and I truly hope 2024 has been kind to you. extremely tardy on replies as you can well see but trying as much as I can to catch up a bit at the ebbing of the past year. I do wish I could have this dream over again, I am comforted as I read and remember the dream even now. I hope our Lord returns soon, the dead will rise and peace will prevail until He makes all things new. Thus is our wonderful hope!
Date: 1/31/2024 10:58:00 PM
Such a beautiful, endearing write dear BJ. So well written. The poem flows gently and perfectly throughout. I love your thoughts and dreams and it is so comforting to read. ‘ love has conquered death’s gold chain’s - what a truly gorgeous line. I loved reading this from your delightful, caring heart dear BJ. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem full of hope. Hugs to you xx
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Date: 12/28/2024 4:37:00 PM
Thank you Christina, I so loved the dream. It is strange when I read this poem how I remember how it just flowed, and my muse was so near. 2024 has leftme so high and dry, but I am trying to get things done on here before it rolls on out the door. I so appreciate your sweet comment, and I pray that the new year ahead will be filled with many blessings for you and your loved ones <3
Date: 1/10/2024 1:54:00 AM
What a dream. God in his infinity is adored by the just and relations. We pray every day to emulate your visions. Well done. God bless.
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Date: 12/28/2024 4:35:00 PM
Thank you Victor, it was such a beautiful dream. I pray our Lord returns soon, the dead will be raised anew and peace will shine soon. Oh, I know it must be soon! God bless you as well dear Victor.
Date: 1/9/2024 6:47:00 AM
BJ, I am SO glad I read this beautiful piece today~~so descriptive, touching, reverent, and inspirational. Janice
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 12/28/2024 4:33:00 PM
Thank you so much Janice. I wish I could hold onto the dream and redream it. It was so wonderful. <3
Date: 1/7/2024 10:10:00 PM
Your poem was very comforting and soothing to read, BJ. The scripture brought joy and peace to my heart and soul, for I know He's gone to prepare a place for me and you. Smiles and Blessing, my sister in Christ. Have a blessed 2024! Hugs, Bill
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 12/28/2024 4:30:00 PM
The dream was so beautiful, I wish I could redream it every time I closed my eyes. I'm glad it brought joy and peace to you. Blessings to you and your dear sweet Sara as well Bill. I know there were blessings in 2024, I need to sort them out. It has been a more difficult year than I would have wanted, but hopefully 2025 will be better. I am trying to reply to comments so late, I feel so bad, but they all mean so much to me. I hope you and your sweetheart are well there in Texas. May 2025 be very good to you I pray!!
Date: 1/7/2024 12:46:00 PM
Such a beauteous heavenly dream weaved into this wondrous poem, Bj. A huge FAVE. Have a splendid and restful Sunday. Warmest regards.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 12/28/2024 4:27:00 PM
Oh, you are so sweet Regina :) I am glad this was a fave for you! Be blessed my friend, may the new year ahead be filled with many blessings for you and those you love!
Date: 1/7/2024 2:17:00 AM
What a lovely dream dear BJ. How exciting it must have been meeting your sister and your brother there in the place of bliss ! Reading this, one would never have even a trace of sorrow, but only pure joy. How I wish, I too get a similar dream and see my parents in Heaven. Both of them left this world in January.... my mother on 5th Jan and my father on 14th... if course in different years. I do think a lot about them these days. Stay blessed dear friend .
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Date: 12/28/2024 4:24:00 PM
You are a dear friend and I always feel I let you and others down dear Valsa. I am so very tardy in responses, 2024 has not been very kind, and I hope 2025 is way better! Your loss is still near, my dad died in 1988 and my mother in 2013. I lost my cousin, like a brother to me in 2014, my sister Nancy 2016, my brother 2020, Barbara my close friend and sister in December 2022 and many other relatives in the past 15 years. They are really mounting up over there on heaven's shore! I am going to try to pull up from this difficult past year, please pray for me. I have lost my muse to the past years blues! Happy 2025 Valsa, I hope you are blessed. One day the Lord will come back and unite His children in peace and love, till then, may He grant you sweet dreams of heavenly bliss <3
Date: 1/6/2024 7:52:00 PM
Sure hope your dream comes true -- a long time from now, Bj. Stick around down here. You have more good to do here. ~ Gershon
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 12/28/2024 4:18:00 PM
Yes, I will stick around until my turn to go, there are a lot of loved ones here too! Most of those left are the younger generation, and they want to keep us here as much as we wanted to keep our beloved who are now on the other side :)
Date: 1/6/2024 7:22:00 AM
A heartfelt write About loved ones that we will see one day when the day comes. I often see my dad and my husband has even smelt the tobacco he used to smoke as he enjoyed his pipe. Yes I promise I will soupmail you as I am about to post my poem. A Lovely, thought felt write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 12/28/2024 4:16:00 PM
Wow Jennifer, that is so comforting. I have had things happen that seemed so like my dad, I think they cheer us on to finish our journey here on this sphere. I look forward to being all together again one day, but have a lot of reasons on this side to continue the journey. The comforting dreams and visits are so precious. I wish I could dream this dream over and over again.
Date: 1/6/2024 6:57:00 AM
Words graceful resonating faith--contemplating love, and life, and heaven--beloved memories--dream or not. Splendidly done, BJ.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 12/28/2024 4:04:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. I hope 2024 has been a blessing to you and the coming new year filled with all that is good. May the dreams of peace and joy come soon.
Date: 1/6/2024 12:48:00 AM
BJ, I like this faith based one that you have shared with us. Those scriptures are so reassuring for Christians to read. I appreciate the time you spent preparing it because those are not easy to put to gather. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 12/28/2024 4:02:00 PM
We have so much hope in those precious scriptures, I don't know what I would do without our Lord. Thank you for the uplifting comment. I enjoyed reading your Christmas Tree poem today. Happy new year Sara <3
Date: 1/5/2024 7:40:00 PM
I just love dreams like this, BJ. Your feel good write is very relatable to me and I'm sure to others as well. Dad and Barb are smiling :) Happy New Year! Charlie
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 12/28/2024 4:00:00 PM
Thank you Charles, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I was over today visiting your poems, and truly, you are an inspiration, please stick around! Are you really 97 or just teasing? You are uplifting and so present, your soul is young! My aunt is 100 and still going dancing with her son :) She is happy and spry, and also an inspiration to all who know her :)
Date: 1/5/2024 7:20:00 PM
Such a lovely visit to heaven in a dream Betty. One day we’ll get there and be with those we’ve loved and lost, how wonderful it’s going to be eventually… Belle
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 12/28/2024 3:56:00 PM
It was a wonderful dream. I miss those precious family members and friends in the dream, and the sea of humanity was so beautiful. I hope you are blessed in the new year ahead, though you left the comment in 2024 I am answering on the cusp of 2025, and so sorry for the delay. I hope 2024 was a good year for you and 2025 even better <3
Date: 1/5/2024 2:32:00 PM
Another great! I love this poetic view into heaven that you were blessed with. Thank you for sharing this dream. To have a glimpse into what awaits the believer in the here after really lifts my spirit. Keep writing great poems. I can't wait to read your next one. Have a happy and blessed 2024 BJ.
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Date: 12/28/2024 3:53:00 PM
Aw, Anon :) I'm sorry to be so tardy in response to your uplifting comment. Again, you know up front the challenges of this past couple years, especially. Lets pray 2025 is better! Thank you for being such a support to me on here and in life! I will try to meet your challenge, but I doubt that I can meet it. No Dodge Challenger if I meet your challenge?? I think I could write like a star if we could buy that awesome car ') Just kidding. We're too old for that racey kind of engine anyway (Never!!), but maybe it is time to trade in the mini van...just sayin?? Haha, sorry hubby. Thank you for your sweet comment <3 :)
Date: 1/5/2024 2:12:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem BJ... One day we will be reunited with our savior and our much beloved ones! I can't wait to go be with Him and family and friends that have passed through this earth. I believe it's going to be such a joyful and beautiful place and the thought of no more pain or tears is wonderful.. I hope you are doing well my friend and I hope and pray you have a very blessed New Year! ~Anna Kaianah
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 12/28/2024 3:44:00 PM
Aw, Anna, thank you. I must say, you have been a main stay in this past year of challenge and loss, I know you know up front how things have been on the front! Well, 2024 is almost out the door, and 2025 may bring the joy that we have all been praying for. May you be blessed in 2025 dear Anna!
Date: 1/5/2024 11:57:00 AM
Hello my friend so nice to see you posting again... This heartfelt and vivid poem beautifully captures the essence of a dream about heaven, resonating with themes of joy, family, and the promise of eternal love.. Its very personal to you and in my dreams, I also see loved ones who have left this world.. especially my dad, such a please to read you again..
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Date: 12/28/2024 3:40:00 PM
You are always so kind and uplifting SO. I really have been down this year, too many losses too fast and a myriad of challenges in 2024, I feel glad to see the year go and feel so bad that I have not been able to reply nor write much this whole year! You are a dear friend and I appreciate you so much. I hope you are blessed in 2025. Our loved ones on the other side are cheering us on to our completion, so, hopefully I can begin to run a more steady race in 2025. Anyway, even without my muse, I can be on here and respond, and bask in others writings :)
Date: 1/5/2024 10:10:00 AM
Dear BJ, I am utterly astounded by the sheer brilliance and enchanting quality of this poetic masterpiece. The exquisite beauty and vivid imagery displayed in this captivating dream leave me at a loss for words to adequately express my admiration. Wish you all the best in 2024
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Date: 12/28/2024 3:35:00 PM
Thank you so much for your encouragement Sotto, you have been such a dear friend on here. The dream was astounding, I so miss all those who have departed to the other side, there are so many. Your comment here is from nearly a year ago, 2024 has been a hard year for our family, but I am trying to reply before it is gone! I hope 2025 is filled with many blessings for you :)
Date: 1/5/2024 5:41:00 AM
Oh my Bj this completely grabbed my heart! What a magical, beautiful encounter with the ones you love who have left earth ….especially Barbara! I bet it gave you great comfort, connection and a peacefulness. I want to dream your dream!!! Haha…You wrote this straight from your beautiful loving heart and that shines throughout your poem! POTD for me!! Debx
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 12/28/2024 3:27:00 PM
Oh, it was a wonderful dream. I wish I could dream this dream over every night. I miss Barbara something fierce. Her daughter came over a few weeks ago and gifted me the angel topper Barbara once had on her tree. This year has been so different. We usually decorate the house with lights and make it a winter wonderland. This year I never got the family tree up, but my neighbor gave me her tree, and I found decorations from my aunt Betty, and had the angel Barb gave me for this new tree. It was special <3
Date: 1/5/2024 12:14:00 AM
We all look forward to that day when your dream will become a reality for us all. Hope 2024 brings you good health and happiness BJ. Tom
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Date: 12/28/2024 3:23:00 PM
Thank you, Tom. The year of 2024 is almost out the door. I'm sorry I haven't been replying to comments, I am really hopeful 2025 is a better year, this one has been challenging for us! I look forward to the joyful reality of our Lord's return, and there will be peace and joy!

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