Visions of Sugar Plums

A child up past your bedtime sat and stared, 
a penny now for what you're thinking, 
in the garden snow was scarce, 
you saw the sculpture slowly shrinking. 

You didn't pay attention 
when in those mid-winter thaws 
the sculpture upped and disappeared, 
for there was Santa Claus! 

the Tooth Fairy! the Easter Bunny! 
all are real to you right now, 
sparking your imagination, 
causing you to giggle. 
Those presents, candies, shiny quarters 
made your young heart sing with joy! 

Much later, as a loving father, 
you'll relive these wondrous dreams, 
and enjoy them with your kids, 
these wondrous dreams 
so well remembered, 
of the days when you were just a boy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/7/2016 9:55:00 PM
Loved how you weaved this, great poem!
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/7/2016 10:00:00 PM
Thanks Arthur! much obliged...
Date: 1/7/2016 11:10:00 AM
Fabulous memory recalling imagery..Great job. Best wishes, Nigel
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/7/2016 12:28:00 PM
Much obliged ol' pal! Keith
Date: 1/7/2016 6:56:00 AM
wow.....this is great
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Date: 1/6/2016 3:47:00 PM
Oh , I'm not that old but you've brought me my childhood memories , very sensual and great write my friend , hugs / / :) dalia
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/6/2016 3:49:00 PM
Thanks dalia! Ah, the memories! Best wishes, Keith
Date: 1/6/2016 10:20:00 AM
those childhood memories....the greatest part of our entity....no cares at all....just laughter and falls....watching mama's kiss make it better....keith, you can really put the words together....bravo
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/6/2016 10:24:00 AM
Thanks for the comments and the compliment my friend! Best wishes, Keith
Date: 1/6/2016 9:16:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..It brought back childhood thoughts of if the myths were really real..Thanks for stopping by my work..Sara
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/6/2016 9:57:00 AM
Thanks Sara... much appreciated. Keith
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