Visions of Match Stick Girl

Visions Of Match Stick Girl
                 (“A Christmas Tale”)

New Year’s Eve came in the dark, on the cobbled stone street
On frigid snow and bitter cold, on the little shoeless, hatless girl  
Visions of the match stick girl came through
Her name was Mary; lost like a little lamb in fog and ice
London has that effect on fragile things in England winters
She lost her parents too and oversized slippers there
The ones her mum once wore and gave to her with such care
Mother, father and slippers gone in an instance in the snow
Rolled over by two speeding carriages that killed them cold
She sells her match sticks by the River Ripper
Signs read, “No guns or knives permitted about the wharf”
Match girl does not fear for things she cannot read
But for her life and freezing on the New Year’s Eve
She sells only one match at a time
For a penny or a pence for what they’re worth
Poor girl has few customers along the river
As foul weather sets in and worsens
She stumbles sickly, stubs her toe on cobble stones
But still sings merrily against the folding snow

	
Not for contest
Based on Theme- The Little Match Girl by H.C. Andersen
“A Christmas Tale”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/9/2014 7:19:00 PM
I remember this tale from my childhood - so sad with wonderful imagery - great writ Earl:-) Hugs jan xx
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 12/9/2014 8:34:00 PM
Hi Jan, Thank you. Glad you liked it. I was going to go off in a different direction but decided to keep within the parameters of the implied contest guidelines even though I am not in it, so the big slippers, 2 carriages and other beginning items stayed in. I invented new images and landscape elements like the river and wharf just for fun. I didn't want to tamper with your childhood memories too much. Take care. Earl
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