Vision Quest – Horse and Rider

There are many moons
in the essence of too far –
a total eclipse,
if one just sees feet.
My skin expands with the heat
of my ancestors
in this endless space;
visions come to me boldly,
like mid-day lovers,
blooming on canvass
as if midnight lined my dreams 
on a turquoise road.
I come for the walk,
and the answers that whisper
from many strange moons.




Inspired by Abe Lopez's Native American Ekphrasis, T.C Cannon Tribute Contest. :)

Painting by T.C Cannon entitled, Horse.
http://www.askart.com/AskART/photos/ALT20070608_3667/132.jpg
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Guzzi Avatar
January 28, 2010 at 4:42 PM
wonderful writing..where are you? fret...come home! Light & Love
Pate Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 11:42 AM
Connecting to nature and our ancient relatives is the essence of vision trips. To travel while staying still. You did a beautiful job of capturing the essence.
La France Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 12:57 PM
Congratulations on your win
Strand Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 11:58 PM
Congrats on your succes in Abe's contest Kristin Rgds Brian.
Winter Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 3:40 PM
Had to drop by and say YAY! Congrats my sweet. Always brilliant. xoxo
Gorelick Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 3:17 PM
Happy to once again congratulate you on an outstanding win. BG
Richards Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 2:28 PM
Congratulations dear Kristin! Loved this poem and your beautiful view of T.C. Cannon in the contest!! Love, Carrie
Hudson Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 2:20 PM
Loved the imagery here, congrats on your win in the contest!-AA
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June 30, 2009 at 12:28 PM
Nice use of imagery in this poem. Congratulations on being one of the contest winners. Another honor for your to enjoy. Keep on writing. Karen
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June 30, 2009 at 12:13 PM
Kristin, congrats with your success in the contest...Raul
Lopez Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 10:45 AM
congratulations you have won 8th place in the contest."Native American Ekphrasis"(t.c. cannon) Thank you for supporting my contest. ..........Alopez
Mckenzie Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 1:36 PM
Very different interpretation of a great painting! Very creative! Good luck in the contest! Laura :)
Winter Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 8:10 AM
Wow, love the painting you chose as your poetry deeply enhances it! What you get from a painting is a gift to us in words. Creative mind of vision, master of poetry, an enormous combination. Powerful feelings evoked. So well done. Love, Shar
Williams Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 6:11 AM
Hi Kristin... brilliant as ever ! ... ps on going.... if I could my dear, I would be gone yesterday, if I could change time I would be gone years ago.... circumstances at the moment make it an impossibility.... go I would indeed, if I could :)
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May 20, 2009 at 4:35 PM
Lady Kristin...you tried to sneak one by me in the evening hours...LOL...this is awesome my poetic genius friend...on a turquoise road...such love in that line. You are on top of your game again...brilliance doesn't sleep for long....
Bingham Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 4:31 PM
You guys are all writing some wonderful poetry dedicated to our Native American brothers and sisters. It's about time they were given to instead of always having to give up. God Bless. Ron
Devonshire Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 4:23 PM
You've captured the Native American "Spirit" beautifully in this thoughtful write with many compelling images. A true mood setting poem! Love, Carolyn
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