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Vision At Dusk

Evening sun dipping beneath yonder horizon Casts surreal pirouetting hazy shadows across my face, My mind wandering trancelike into an ethereal Vision, escaping time and unreal space while I dozed Dreamlike into an imaginary world where I saw Exquisite gardens of multi-colored daisies waving, And among them I saw shadowy creatures gliding Which I knew were angels from fleeting ages past Tending plantings of the Lord’s exquisite spring. Though strangely familiar to me, I could not see their faces Or discern their names; they were surely ancestors Who loved the sweet smells of flowers--just as I do.
THIRD PLACE WINNER written May 23, 2021 for "Dreamlike" Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

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Date: 6/2/2021 3:29:00 PM
Milt, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge, peace _ Constance
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Date: 6/2/2021 4:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance. I enjoyed your contest.
Date: 6/2/2021 12:15:00 PM
Great Work. Congratulations!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/2/2021 1:01:00 PM
Thanks, Christuraj. I appreciate it.
Date: 5/25/2021 1:14:00 PM
You have done a marvelous thing with a required word bank; not easy, yet it seems effortless as I read.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/2/2021 1:01:00 PM
Thank you, Caren. I appreciate your read and your comment so much.
Date: 5/23/2021 1:04:00 PM
You used the allocated words well in your verse Milton and its quite a deep and emotional write. You've ticked all the boxes in my opinion, Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/23/2021 4:32:00 PM
Thanks so much, Tom. I gave it the old college try!
Date: 5/23/2021 11:36:00 AM
Phantasmagoric poetic painting, dearest, L Milton. Blessings my friend!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/23/2021 11:45:00 AM
Thank you so much, Demetrios. I really appreciate your thoughtful comment.

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