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Vision - 4th Place

Fierce vision, as sharp as cutter One that left my heart to stutter A glare that left my soul naked Like I was so rogue and wicked It looked at me deep to the bone Trying to tame my heart of stone It tried to steal my will to thrive But I won't budge while I'm alive 4th place Five senses poetry contest Judged: September 14, 2023 Sponsor: Sotto Poet

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Date: 9/13/2023 2:08:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your winning work in Lasaad's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 9/13/2023 2:43:00 PM
Thank you very much... Way to go...
Date: 9/11/2023 10:04:00 AM
A great, powerful, well written poem Roger. Rhymes perfectly. I love the strength of the last line. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 9/11/2023 11:24:00 AM
Thank you very much...
Date: 9/11/2023 3:43:00 AM
Creative lines penned. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Date: 9/11/2023 4:24:00 AM
Thank you very much...

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