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virtuous wreck

(double sijo) virtuous woman seasoned of life’s wisdom without schism sex kitten smitten, honey dos omitted, all lies acquitted having searched wrecked world over… found fickle love… where’s my dove? ~ like a wreck upon sands of salty seas, `Tis God hears my pleas "Still round the corner there may wait, a new road or a secret gate." as hollowed hull awaits true love’s fate… a virtuous mate ========================================== Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dream weaver Contest Name In a land called fantasy

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Date: 11/24/2011 12:16:00 AM
JOHN, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! AND CONGRATULATIONS IN THE contest`" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.
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Date: 11/23/2011 6:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "In a land called fantasy" contest Moses. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2011 8:41:00 PM
John Freeman! This is the best sijo I have read in a very long time...wish it rated higher...fun and great rhyming too. Happy Turkey Day, Gwendolen
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Date: 11/22/2011 5:42:00 PM
Congrats MOses on HM with this clever creation for the contest my friend... H.T. Day..luv..
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Date: 11/22/2011 11:38:00 AM
Dear John, I have had similar frustration finding my own "dove." There don't seem to be too many "virtuous mates" out there, but all we can do is live according to God's plan and seek his guidance. Congratulations on your success in Tracie's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/22/2011 8:55:00 AM
Well done John. Congratulations on your HM
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Date: 11/21/2011 8:24:00 PM
this is a really cool poem John. Lots of depth in the search and interesting similes. good luck in the contest.
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