Virmeris Utralien

if you had an eye to see
you would see what was written
about our next apocalypse
man, this world is a quagmire
so much evil has spread
and just on this day
that looked good to die 
after the rain fell
leaving the filthy world washed away
and just tonight
when all that was lacking in blessing
finally seemed consecrated
then...
again we are pure mud
steeped in squalor and suffering
and even if it was epiphany
the promise of the end of pain
that arises every moment
or if it was a false joy
this little hope that insists
we would never give up trying to live
we would never think again
at the idea of being purified for nothing

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Date: 4/11/2022 4:45:00 PM
Wow, Marco, this is great writing. I'm thinking concentration or readjustment camp? The imagery is striking and it elicits a sense of futility...yet "this little hope that insists." Am I totally off?
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Date: 4/11/2022 6:42:00 PM
My initial idea with this poem is that we have spread iniquity so much that we will not escape a final judgment... this judgment would be the apocalypse. We deserve it, we believe we are purified and prepared for it, and then... we make mistakes again and deserve a new and worse punishment. guilt and atonement, Catholicism and Judaism, but it doesn't shy away from its own death camp scene, and in that you're absolutely right, Milton.
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