Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- Virgin Dreams -

She collects dreams
like feather in down pillows
her skin in a fever
- in meditation
into a particular story
Last call for lonely hearts
which recently dropped yellow leaves

An embrace
in and out of dimensions
- only to turn back
can't hold back the feelings
she's sound asleep
slowly sinking through the light
a wonderful woe






31/10/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Poem of the Day: 01/11/2019

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Line Gauthier November 18, 2019 at 10:11 AM What a beautiful poem, Sunshine. Why was this not entered in my Last Call for Lonely Hearts contest? Congrats on your well deserved POTD. Anne-Lise Andresen November 18, 2019 at 11:22 AM - Virgin Dreams - N/A LAST CALL FOR LONELY HEARTS Line Gauthier // - It was entered in your contest, Line ... it got N/D ... thank you very much - // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos November 10, 2019 at 12:38 PM Forgive me my lovely friend, I am only going through POTD for everyone I have missed during those two weeks - a wispy breathtaking write - 'She collects dreams, like feather in down pillow. Heartfelt congratulations on the honor of POTD. Hugs and blessings Jenny. Anne-Lise Andresen November 10, 2019 at 1:10 PM - Always nice to see you on my poems, my friend Jenny - I really appreciate your congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu November 2, 2019 at 1:12 PM Hello Sunshine Smile, she is really in a deep slumber. Have a nice day my friend. Hugs Darlene Anne-Lise Andresen November 2, 2019 at 1:20 PM - Many thanks for your kind visit and your lovely comments, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One November 2, 2019 at 7:30 AM great poem congrats on potd.. Anne-Lise Andresen November 2, 2019 at 1:18 PM - Many thanks for congratulations ... I really appreciate your friendly visit, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann November 2, 2019 at 2:33 AM Hi Anne-Lise. I am glad that the dream did not turn into a nightmare. Kai Anne-Lise Andresen November 2, 2019 at 1:19 PM - Many thanks Kai, for your kind visit and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper November 1, 2019 at 11:47 PM Back with congratulations on POTD Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen November 2, 2019 at 1:17 PM - Many thanks for congratulations ... I really appreciate your friendly visit, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brandy Nicole November 1, 2019 at 7:04 PM Dreams are meant to leave you breathless. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. Your thoughts caress the page with elegance and grace. Congratulations Anne-Lise, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy Anne-Lise Andresen November 2, 2019 at 1:01 PM - Many thanks for congratulations on my p.o.t.d. ... greatly appreciate your visit, Brandy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin November 1, 2019 at 6:50 PM Congratulations on POTD Anne-Lise, enjoyed! Anne-Lise Andresen November 2, 2019 at 1:01 PM - Many thanks for congratulations on my p.o.t.d. ... greatly appreciate your visit, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell November 1, 2019 at 4:33 PM Nicely done Anne-Lise, fully deserving the POTD. Dream on! Anne-Lise Andresen November 2, 2019 at 1:04 PM Thank you very much, glad you enjoy it Gordon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison November 1, 2019 at 3:21 PM i just adore the opening lines Anne-Lise! many congrats on POTD my sweet friend:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 3:34 PM - Many thanks for congratulations on my p.o.t.d. ... greatly appreciate your visit, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith November 1, 2019 at 3:11 PM Congratulations on your POTD. Dreams both day and night are in a world of their own. Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 3:33 PM - Many thanks for congratulations on my p.o.t.d. ... greatly appreciate your visit, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ashok Kumar Mishra November 1, 2019 at 1:22 PM Beautifully depicted... Congrats on potd Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 3:33 PM - Many thanks for congratulations on my p.o.t.d. ... greatly appreciate your visit, Ashok :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kurt Ravidas November 1, 2019 at 12:26 PM A fine and introspective poetry. My best congrats on POTD, S.S.) Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 3:33 PM - Many thanks for congratulations on my p.o.t.d. ... greatly appreciate your visit, Kurt :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter November 1, 2019 at 10:04 AM Truly unusual! Congratulations to you! Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 3:32 PM - Many thanks for congratulations on my p.o.t.d. ... greatly appreciate your visit, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Lawless November 1, 2019 at 9:10 AM Well the title peaked my curiosity and the opening lines led me into a the wonder of the dreams. Beautiful write Anne-Lise Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 3:32 PM - Many thanks for congratulations on my p.o.t.d. ... greatly appreciate your visit, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May November 1, 2019 at 7:53 AM So many dream dimensions..Congrats on POTD Anne.. Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 3:31 PM - Many thanks for congratulations on my p.o.t.d. ... greatly appreciate your visit, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior November 1, 2019 at 7:46 AM Well crafted my dear friend...Congrats!! on POTD!! Anne-Lise...poetry hugs...^WW^ :o) Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 3:31 PM - Many thanks for congratulations on my p.o.t.d. ... greatly appreciate your visit, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina November 1, 2019 at 6:55 AM Very cool Anna-Lise. Congratulations on POTD. Hugs // Charlie :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 3:30 PM - Many thanks for congratulations on my p.o.t.d. ... greatly appreciate your visit, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit November 1, 2019 at 6:20 AM Congrats Anne-Lise on poem of the day..glad to see your poem I FAVED in this space. Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 3:30 PM - Your fave made my poem to p.o.t.d., Vijay ... again, many thanks my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael November 1, 2019 at 6:10 AM CONGRATULATIONS Anne-Lise on POTD...Virgin Dreams Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 3:27 PM - Many thanks for congratulations on my p.o.t.d. ... greatly appreciate your visit, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams November 1, 2019 at 5:13 AM Back to say congratulations on POTD. very deserving poem my friend ... hugs Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 3:27 PM - Many thanks for congratulations on my p.o.t.d. ... greatly appreciate your visit, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham November 1, 2019 at 2:16 AM Back with congratulations Anne, on POTD honours. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 5:10 AM - Many thanks for happy news and congratulations, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hello There October 31, 2019 at 10:32 PM "She collects dreams like feather in down pillows" ~ love this! Love the picture, too ~ it fits perfectly <3 Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 5:08 AM - H.T., many thanks for your kind visit and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams October 31, 2019 at 8:43 PM you pulled my right into this one with that first line....beautifully penned Anne-Lise... i love this :) hugs Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 5:08 AM - Many thanks for your kind visit and your lovely comments, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper October 31, 2019 at 3:23 PM love the imagery , Sunshine, good luck in the contest. hugs Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 5:07 AM - Many thanks for your kind visit and your lovely comments, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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