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These aims are only to be done, from the top down

it will then work the same way as it is read.'

P R Parasite Removal P C Populace Critical B L M Better Life Mandating P O V Positive Oratory Vibes V I P Vitally Imperative progression

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 7/25/2022 1:47:00 PM

A great write... Very well penned

Joe Maverick
Date: 7/25/2022 3:20:00 PM

Why thank you Paghunda. I Am trying to save some human lives is all.' God bless.'

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 7/25/2022 1:35:00 PM

A great write... Very well penned

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/6/2022 8:37:00 AM

A couple books worth of wisdom in these powerful lines -- I glean more read after read. Thank you, Joe. Oh, ingenious presentation. Very thoughtful form! A Fav!

Joe Maverick
Date: 7/6/2022 1:13:00 PM

Thank you, Joe so great of you To comment.'

Silpika Kalita

Date: 7/3/2022 11:57:00 AM

Iam always a fan of imagism verses, your composition is much reflective, concrete and to the point without much rhetorical infusion..... Silpika

Joe Maverick
Date: 7/3/2022 12:31:00 PM

Hey thanks Silpika.' Good to Hear from you today, all blessings.)