Violin

First you hear it 
Its sweet and soft
So quiet and loving
You hear its sweet voice singing
Among all others 
Then it gets louder and louder 
the notes warped around you like a 
Warm blanket you cant 
Help but listen to its sweet
And beautiful melody 
Then it starts to sing but 
Now its angry and 
The notes get faster and faster
Its like a tornado mixing everything 
Together but you 
Cant help but to listen to 
the violins sweet angry melody
Swarming around you like a hive of bees
Its addicting, its thrilling, its calming, and peaceful
All raped up in one
But soon its sweet voice slows and the end is
Near you listen 
As the anger turns to sadness 
And then its voice just 
Disappears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/23/2010 8:09:00 AM
This is a wonderful piece! Accept my colorful congrats on having this poem featured this week. You are such a nice poet! Please, keep your poetry pens dancing on your poetry pad. I wish you all the best with your writing. Love ~Adeleke~
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Date: 6/21/2010 5:45:00 PM
Very interesting poem here. Congratulations on being featured this week. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 6/21/2010 3:37:00 PM
Very addictive, Trina. I could find myself traveling along with your rythm. Keep up the good work, God Bless, Cile
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Date: 6/21/2010 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Trina. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/26/2010 3:52:00 PM
Your freudian slip is quite interesting in itself and I like the tempo of your musical poem. What a pleasant sounding instrument the violin is. Thanks for your lovely comment on my poem. Love, Susan
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Date: 5/21/2010 12:27:00 PM
I love the violin too ;) nice write. Light & Love
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Date: 5/15/2010 10:09:00 PM
plz comment and rate thank u 4 reading my poem :)
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Date: 5/11/2010 8:24:00 PM
I really enjoyed this your writing is very detailed which i like. I can actually see and hear the violin.. very good *check spelling though warped raped
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