Violin

First you hear it 
Its sweet and soft
So quiet and loving
You hear its sweet voice singing
Among all others 
Then it gets louder and louder 
the notes warped around you like a 
Warm blanket you cant 
Help but listen to its sweet
And beautiful melody 
Then it starts to sing but 
Now its angry and 
The notes get faster and faster
Its like a tornado mixing everything 
Together but you 
Cant help but to listen to 
the violins sweet angry melody
Swarming around you like a hive of bees
Its addicting, its thrilling, its calming, and peaceful
All raped up in one
But soon its sweet voice slows and the end is
Near you listen 
As the anger turns to sadness 
And then its voice just 
Disappears
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Adeite Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 8:09 AM
This is a wonderful piece! Accept my colorful congrats on having this poem featured this week. You are such a nice poet! Please, keep your poetry pens dancing on your poetry pad. I wish you all the best with your writing. Love ~Adeleke~
Scripca Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 5:45 PM
Very interesting poem here. Congratulations on being featured this week. Love, Iolanda
Beer Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 3:37 PM
Very addictive, Trina. I could find myself traveling along with your rythm. Keep up the good work, God Bless, Cile
Brown Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 8:34 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Trina. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
Mills Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 3:52 PM
Your freudian slip is quite interesting in itself and I like the tempo of your musical poem. What a pleasant sounding instrument the violin is. Thanks for your lovely comment on my poem. Love, Susan
Guzzi Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 12:27 PM
I love the violin too ;) nice write. Light & Love
Aiken Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 10:09 PM
plz comment and rate thank u 4 reading my poem :)
Carr Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 8:24 PM
I really enjoyed this your writing is very detailed which i like. I can actually see and hear the violin.. very good *check spelling though warped raped
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