Violet

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Image result for young girl with violet flower

That purplish glow  tints her innocence
Like a dainty bloom in the mist of spring;
Frolicking on woods as she gently laughs
To invite jays for a caper, a tune!

Wavy  locks adorn a heart-shaped face
Morning-kissed through daylight’s gaiety;
Then plays hide-and-seek with breezes 
Unaffected by mild trails of rainfall.

Till  sunshine flutters  into  near  noon
Each perfumed cheek beaming, newly tanned
Yet  merry her romp, her dress winging
In lilac tones...such a rare delight. 

Awed, I cuddle my dear Violet
Oh, lovely god –daughter so pleasant,
Ripening through those flowering eyes
Violet child, my gem from above.


             
BRIAN'S CHOICE B Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/14/2020 1:49:00 AM
This is incredibly beautiful Nette, as is the photo! Congratulations on your deserving First Place win! xxoo
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Date: 5/14/2020 1:47:00 AM
Congratulated Fecilitated Quite enjoyable Brave
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Date: 9/15/2016 6:09:00 AM
Congratulation Nette. This is very good and very emotional. Well done. Kai
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 5/13/2020 12:55:00 PM
casarah's theme inspired me!
Date: 9/15/2016 3:15:00 AM
Congrats Nette....."Ripening through those flowering eyes". Your crafted words are soothing :-)
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Date: 9/14/2016 7:42:00 PM
How can one not smile upon reading this lovely poem!? Lovely as the violets of which it speaks! Well done, Nette!
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Date: 9/14/2016 7:38:00 PM
So beautiful, Nette, I love the way you have described her.. congratulations on your win !!!
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Date: 9/14/2016 3:09:00 PM
I am so happy to see this entry near the top Nette. I am back to congratulate you on a fine win! : ) 7
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Date: 9/14/2016 12:58:00 PM
very sweet Nette :) I also wrote one for my daughter, they are so precious...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/14/2016 12:33:00 PM
A lovely poem. Congrats on your win, Nette.
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Date: 9/14/2016 12:28:00 PM
Blooming lovely Nette! many congrats hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/10/2016 5:32:00 PM
A very nice image adds punch to this fine work. It must be nice to be a godmother! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/7/2016 2:31:00 PM
A truly lovely choice of flower, Nette, and beautiful personification! Yours is also a lovely god–daughter in full bloom. hugs ~ paul
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Date: 9/5/2016 1:08:00 AM
Violets are such beautiful flowers, as is this poem! Hugs!
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Date: 9/4/2016 3:03:00 AM
This is so lovely and sweet Nette. I will bet it does great in the contest. I love it! 7 ; )
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Date: 9/2/2016 11:29:00 AM
Excellent write. Beautifully expressed. All the best for the contest.
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Date: 9/1/2016 5:24:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Nette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/31/2016 1:43:00 AM
Just lovely stuff. I like this a lot.
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Date: 8/30/2016 6:45:00 PM
This is extremely beautiful nette...you will be blooming on the podium with this.
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