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Vines That Bind

In this garden my calloused feet trace pathways Along wild flowers and rose bushes Planted by gracefully meticulous hands She knelt in the sunset and moon rise Creating this carefully chosen form of Eden As the sun rose and moon set her tears nourished Her protege flourishing with the guide of her soul Through blurred eyes I gaze upon her struggle Unable to comfort her pain away as her life fades Vines encircling my wrists gripping me steadfast Her grown nature keeping me at a distance To share your soul is to ensnare With thickening barbs and thorns that pierce These feelings take solidity when she cries Skin yielding up to this solemnity remains As essence seeps into the soil beneath The beast wages an internal war to rip these binds Being barred from her light's eminence No force embedded can halt this flowing Yearning to protect from this ebbing darkness we share Screams tear up through the thickening silence Realization begins to set in as the fog rolls over Her eyes can no longer touch mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/30/2014 9:13:00 AM
Good morning Sam, you may want to change to calloused feet. There is a lot to digest with this one. "Through blurred eyes I gaze upon her struggle" what a great line.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/30/2014 6:59:00 PM
I use an iPad, occasionally autocorrect leads to embarrassment. *lol*
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Sam Beloved
Date: 1/30/2014 6:56:00 PM
Oh my! Thank you for noticing that :) I type from a tablet and it sure loves to auto correct haha
Date: 1/8/2014 11:32:00 PM
What did I say?!? : ) You're truly one of those rare classics indeed. -Your poetry friend Dawn
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Date: 1/8/2014 1:53:00 AM
This is a beautiful visual journey. Well done.
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Date: 1/3/2014 11:42:00 PM
Wow, her eyes can no longer touch mine.. that is deep.. Sam, this is the kind of poetry i like. Lines with the best metaphoric imagery. She knelt in the sunset----- calloused--- pathway... epci enough... Enjoyed.. LINDA
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Date: 1/3/2014 11:11:00 PM
This is so beaurifuy written and so visual. you are an amazing talent. and I;m totaly inspired. youe visuals are siperb deataul just wonderfyl. well done take care. Pete.l
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Sam Beloved
Date: 1/3/2014 11:18:00 PM
Huge grin to know I've inspired you :) thanks you so much. Sam

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