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Village Love

sordid floors dark paths lily scented nights crispy country air crackling fireplaces shadows under the moon sounds of the night silence in the dark mingling tangoing in perfect pitch the harmonious beat of intoxicating drums the twirling dance of dizzying village love

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Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 11/28/2024 2:29:00 AM

Awesome write many blessings

Beata Agustin

Date: 10/23/2024 7:39:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 2/27/2023 6:08:00 AM

Nice poem You described it well.

Mpho Kgaswane

Date: 12/10/2022 8:24:00 PM

Hi Eshe, this is a beautiful poem, love the description of the scene.

Itumeleng Cangua

Date: 6/25/2022 11:40:00 PM

No words to describe how I feel, well done and keep it up.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/23/2022 9:50:00 AM

Dear Eshe, your rich, vibrant, textured imagery is a feast for the senses and brings me to the center of this exhilarating moment. "Village love" so beautifully expressed. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 6/22/2022 9:12:00 PM

Eshe, this is beautiful!

Eshe Benson
Date: 6/22/2022 10:38:00 PM