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Village Love

sordid floors dark paths lily scented nights crispy country air crackling fireplaces shadows under the moon sounds of the night silence in the dark mingling tangoing in perfect pitch the harmonious beat of intoxicating drums the twirling dance of dizzying village love

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Date: 2/27/2023 6:08:00 AM
Nice poem You described it well.
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Date: 12/10/2022 8:24:00 PM
Hi Eshe, this is a beautiful poem, love the description of the scene.
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Date: 6/25/2022 11:40:00 PM
No words to describe how I feel, well done and keep it up.
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Date: 6/23/2022 9:50:00 AM
Dear Eshe, your rich, vibrant, textured imagery is a feast for the senses and brings me to the center of this exhilarating moment. "Village love" so beautifully expressed. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/22/2022 9:12:00 PM
Eshe, this is beautiful!
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Eshe Benson
Date: 6/22/2022 10:38:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer
Date: 5/27/2022 8:48:00 AM
So nice
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Eshe Benson
Date: 6/22/2022 10:38:00 PM
Thank you Steve
Date: 3/20/2022 6:23:00 AM
You made me feel like I was there. If you are on Facebook look up my site The Inspired Poetry Project. I think you would fit in nicely. :0)
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Date: 3/17/2022 10:50:00 PM
Melodic to my ear and well done. I love it.
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Date: 2/11/2022 8:15:00 AM
I can feel every word!! Delightful write!
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Date: 2/9/2022 8:38:00 AM
I can feel the rhythmic beat and the heart of community....great imagery. Cheers, Paulette
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Date: 2/8/2022 4:00:00 PM
Village love perfectly described and sounds wonderful too, lovely poetry Eshe… Belle
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