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Village Love

sordid floors
dark paths
lily scented nights 
crispy country air
crackling fireplaces
shadows under the moon
sounds of the night
silence in the dark
mingling
tangoing 
in perfect pitch 
the harmonious beat
of intoxicating drums
the twirling dance
of dizzying 
village 
love

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Richard Evans

May 11, 2025 at 11:37 AM

Very visual. I dig the line "crispy country air". Lovely verse. Thanks for sharing..................peace!

Mrs. Yolanda Nicholsen

November 28, 2024 at 2:29 AM

Awesome write many blessings

Beata Agustin

October 23, 2024 at 7:39 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

February 27, 2023 at 6:08 AM

Nice poem You described it well.

Mpho Kgaswane

December 10, 2022 at 8:24 PM

Hi Eshe, this is a beautiful poem, love the description of the scene.

Itumeleng Cangua

June 25, 2022 at 11:40 PM

No words to describe how I feel, well done and keep it up.

Susan Ashley

June 23, 2022 at 9:50 AM

Dear Eshe, your rich, vibrant, textured imagery is a feast for the senses and brings me to the center of this exhilarating moment. "Village love" so beautifully expressed. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan