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Violet’s an arrogant bossy cow I know the farmer knows this now Luke the farmer says, “It's time to mate her” Evan the bull moos, “No deal, I hate her” Violet will not go near the bull Alas she’ll soon be for the cull Cos she’s costing money to be fed Her refusal means soon she’ll be dead Ending up on our dinner plate 09/02/23

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Date: 9/6/2023 8:48:00 PM
I think the more vile is the laboratory Produced meat.??? And whatever is In it.?? Obviously (climate change?) Will be given the driver for its existence And the milk??? ( milk ?) Yet mr gates Now advises burying trees.?? And is Buying land to leave dormant to cause Less food.???
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Joe Maverick
Date: 9/6/2023 8:54:00 PM
The above write is good however Jan..Althiugh i Get overwrought I still Like a fun write.' Was this By wrote.?? Lol))) i guess For me theres no antidote??
Date: 9/6/2023 8:49:00 AM
Another gem from your pen.
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Date: 9/4/2023 1:12:00 PM
a vile vache indeed - I bet she'd give everyone food poisoning, LOL
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2023 1:19:00 PM
ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/3/2023 6:24:00 AM
You are a funny lady Jan….love the eyes on Evan!!! Debx
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2023 7:49:00 AM
The pic is from when mad cow disease was in the press lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/3/2023 5:44:00 AM
Jan, what must you have had for dinner to cultivate this one!! OMG, I just LOVE it!! ( and I'm with Evan!) Happy Sunday xxoo
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2023 5:50:00 AM
lol thanks Mike, I got steaks out of the freezer for Sunday dinner lol. I seem to be on an animal theme at the moment, cats now cows lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/2/2023 3:49:00 PM
I’ll take a pass on having her on my plate. She’s not palatable alive and no doubt would be worse as dead meat.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2023 5:49:00 AM
lol thanks Lin:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/2/2023 1:43:00 PM
A creative/fun ~ write/picture. A fun read. You always make me laugh. Thanks... Have a great day/weekend.............
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2023 5:49:00 AM
thanks Paula I do try and raise a smile if I can:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/2/2023 11:07:00 AM
I bagsy the Châteaubriand Flambé style, you can have the tail end Jan, lol, cheers David
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2023 11:13:00 AM
ohhh I will share Chateaubriand with you any day of the week, its my favourite style of steak. Hugs jan xx
Date: 9/2/2023 10:14:00 AM
Oh my!!! Lololol. Thanks Jan
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2023 10:55:00 AM
I seem to be on an animal theme lol yesterday was cats, today a cow lol. I had to use the image it was from when mad cow disease was in the press. hugs Jan xx

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