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Vile Vache

Violet’s an arrogant bossy cow
I know the farmer knows this now
Luke the farmer says, “It's time to mate her”
Evan the bull moos, “No deal, I hate her”

Violet will not go near the bull
Alas she’ll soon be for the cull
Cos she’s costing money to be fed
Her refusal means soon she’ll be dead
Ending up on our dinner plate

09/02/23
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Maverick Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 8:48 PM
I think the more vile is the laboratory Produced meat.??? And whatever is In it.?? Obviously (climate change?) Will be given the driver for its existence And the milk??? ( milk ?) Yet mr gates Now advises burying trees.?? And is Buying land to leave dormant to cause Less food.???
Maverick Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 8:54 PM
The above write is good however Jan..Althiugh i Get overwrought I still Like a fun write.' Was this By wrote.?? Lol))) i guess For me theres no antidote??
Brotherton Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 8:49 AM
Another gem from your pen.
Horne Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 1:12 PM
a vile vache indeed - I bet she'd give everyone food poisoning, LOL
Allison Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 1:19 PM
ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx
M  Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 6:24 AM
You are a funny lady Jan….love the eyes on Evan!!! Debx
Allison Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 7:49 AM
The pic is from when mad cow disease was in the press lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Gentile Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 5:44 AM
Jan, what must you have had for dinner to cultivate this one!! OMG, I just LOVE it!! ( and I'm with Evan!) Happy Sunday xxoo
Allison Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 5:50 AM
lol thanks Mike, I got steaks out of the freezer for Sunday dinner lol. I seem to be on an animal theme at the moment, cats now cows lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 3:49 PM
I’ll take a pass on having her on my plate. She’s not palatable alive and no doubt would be worse as dead meat.
Allison Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 5:49 AM
lol thanks Lin:-) hugs Jan xx
Goldsmith Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 1:43 PM
A creative/fun ~ write/picture. A fun read. You always make me laugh. Thanks... Have a great day/weekend.............
Allison Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 5:49 AM
thanks Paula I do try and raise a smile if I can:-) hugs Jan xx
Kavanagh  Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 11:07 AM
I bagsy the Châteaubriand Flambé style, you can have the tail end Jan, lol, cheers David
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 11:13 AM
ohhh I will share Chateaubriand with you any day of the week, its my favourite style of steak. Hugs jan xx
Connelly Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 10:14 AM
Oh my!!! Lololol. Thanks Jan
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 10:55 AM
I seem to be on an animal theme lol yesterday was cats, today a cow lol. I had to use the image it was from when mad cow disease was in the press. hugs Jan xx
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