View From Within


Standing here inside your heart,
I feel soft vibrations of a harp
Melodious as a gentle tropical breeze
Your thoughts sing of love
	in a most heavenly octave
I listen with utmost desire,
as this passion inside of me
rises higher and higher 
	to the pitch of your voice
What a spectacular view from within,
perched on the edge of your dreams
Enchanting visions of intimate mind melding
Me wrapped inside of you,
with your love encircling me
Wherever I look, you can also see ...
Whithersoever you go, there go I also
It’s such a perfect view, 
here from within your heart
I shall forever treasure this bonding invitation;
for granting me a space to stay,
with as much room to roam inside
as I desire
Given as much freedom to pursue
the precious grail
To the innermost place
where sparks your sacred fire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/22/2017 11:06:00 AM
Hello Freddie I like this poem you wrote.To me I find your poem has a deep meaning. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 7/11/2017 7:00:00 AM
Freddie, once you get in there, you'll never leave:) Beautiful write my friend:)
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Date: 7/11/2017 3:35:00 AM
Such power and peace within; I am certain that you filled the space, graciously. Beautifully done.
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Date: 7/10/2017 7:38:00 PM
Such a tender man, keep the verses coming. Light & Love
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Date: 7/10/2017 5:45:00 PM
It sounds like her heart is a big and affectionate as yours is my friend. Talk about romantic poets...I think the crown is yours now my friend...hey it looks good on you. :) Beautiful Freddie.
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Date: 7/10/2017 5:22:00 PM
Beautiful and intimate reflections of how love can vibrate and embrace one's thoughts with such a closeness. You have conveyed this so superbly in your poem Freddie! : )
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Date: 7/10/2017 1:58:00 PM
This is so nice Freddie! I love it :)
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Date: 7/10/2017 11:46:00 AM
Tis lovely, Freddie!
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