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View From Within

Standing here inside your heart, I feel soft vibrations of a harp Melodious as a gentle tropical breeze Your thoughts sing of love in a most heavenly octave I listen with utmost desire, as this passion inside of me rises higher and higher to the pitch of your voice What a spectacular view from within, perched on the edge of your dreams Enchanting visions of intimate mind melding Me wrapped inside of you, with your love encircling me Wherever I look, you can also see ... Whithersoever you go, there go I also It’s such a perfect view, here from within your heart I shall forever treasure this bonding invitation; for granting me a space to stay, with as much room to roam inside as I desire Given as much freedom to pursue the precious grail To the innermost place where sparks your sacred fire

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Date: 8/22/2017 11:06:00 AM
Hello Freddie I like this poem you wrote.To me I find your poem has a deep meaning. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 7/11/2017 7:00:00 AM
Freddie, once you get in there, you'll never leave:) Beautiful write my friend:)
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Date: 7/11/2017 3:35:00 AM
Such power and peace within; I am certain that you filled the space, graciously. Beautifully done.
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Date: 7/10/2017 7:38:00 PM
Such a tender man, keep the verses coming. Light & Love
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Date: 7/10/2017 5:45:00 PM
It sounds like her heart is a big and affectionate as yours is my friend. Talk about romantic poets...I think the crown is yours now my friend...hey it looks good on you. :) Beautiful Freddie.
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Date: 7/10/2017 5:22:00 PM
Beautiful and intimate reflections of how love can vibrate and embrace one's thoughts with such a closeness. You have conveyed this so superbly in your poem Freddie! : )
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Date: 7/10/2017 1:58:00 PM
This is so nice Freddie! I love it :)
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Date: 7/10/2017 11:46:00 AM
Tis lovely, Freddie!
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