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crumbling slum buildings a persistence of loud cars air and noise and pollution old home with a garden- woman pushing carriage small kids riding bicycles ________________________ June 26, 2016 Poetry/Choka/View From Train Copyright Protected, ID 16- 804-421-0 All Rights Reseerved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 7/2/2016 5:59:00 PM
this is lovely - could picture this so clearly
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Date: 6/27/2016 3:23:00 PM
this is great, Constance. Was it for a contest?
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Date: 6/27/2016 9:40:00 AM
This view can tell a million stories...great choka Wings...^WW^
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Date: 6/27/2016 5:45:00 AM
Great one...
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Date: 6/27/2016 4:39:00 AM
Sadly, home to some dear Constance...peace, jill
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Date: 6/26/2016 10:10:00 PM
I like the structure of this poem. I'm a fan of cutting words to the bone. Take the picture away and i can still visualize the scene.
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