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View From Love's Hill

I stood on love's hill and watched the sunset Heard my heartbeat through the valley of time It echoed off canyon walls where souls wept Faded with lost sounds of internal rhymes I began the long night where darkness reigns Where the mind plays its sad flute, no one hears Worthless memories, pictures that remained Dissolved so slowly as I screamed, I'm here I waited all night for the empty dawn Faced loneliness and heard its voice within Struggled with anguish until it was gone And found reason and my sanity again I searched the vastness to welcome its peace Stood on love's hill until illusions ceased

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/8/2014 11:31:00 PM
Well done Frederic, heartfelt. Congrats
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Date: 8/7/2014 8:07:00 PM
Frederick...a beautiful sonnet, a pleasure to read. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/7/2014 7:27:00 PM
A beautiful sonnet and win. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/7/2014 6:47:00 AM
ah, the master of sonnets strikes a winner again! a classically beautiful poem, and I love that line "where the mind plays its sad flute"...pensive but lovely - congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 8/7/2014 6:41:00 AM
Awesome.... linda
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Date: 1/16/2014 3:31:00 PM
Bully! I don't do ratings, but I can stand and cheer. Fine writing, which is all I see from you. -Dean
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Frederic Parker
Date: 1/16/2014 4:14:00 PM
thank you for not rating and for reading
Date: 1/11/2014 12:11:00 AM
You write a sonnet very well. It's one of my all time favorite forms to write in. I bet you have done many, and this is a sad theme beautifully addressed.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 1/11/2014 8:21:00 AM
thank you Andrea for your kind answer and yes I have written hundreds, still learning to do them right

Book: Shattered Sighs