Vietnam's Unwelcome Heroes (Co-Written With Tim Ryerson)

We gave Johnny a gun and a uniform
Trained him to kill, in a regiment conform
Sent him deep into Vietnam jungles warm
With little regard to how we did him harm
 
     So certain we knew what we joined to fight for
     We were shipped off to fight an unwinnable war
     A war of "containment," unlike those before
     Mothers screamed, fathers wept, siblings ached to the core
 
By parachute dropped to a ghastly death scene
Johnny ached for the life left behind, so serene
His family, fiance did not know what war means
Especially the haunting of lost children's screams
 
     Those of us who survived thought we'd just done our jobs
     We returned and were shamed by violent gobs
     Of silver-spoon white kids in hate-spewing mobs
     Spat-on and welcomed as baby-killer slobs
 
No heroes welcome would await these young men
No ticker-tape parades were staged for them
Just jeers from crowds, uncaring government
Greeted the lonely Vietnam Veteran

     Too classy and noble to demand our fair share 
     We lay in that shabby old hospital there
     In a closet-sized room with no visitors' chair
     Understaffed, underfunded, with short-handed care

The "benefits" they found would astound all now
And it leaves one to wonder how our hallowed ground
Would be filled with unnamed graves of men once proud
Before the rows of white crosses we should bow
 
     Our Wailing-Wall stands now in Washington, D.C.
     So shiny but black, a telling-tale of the fee
     We have paid for our nation, our land of the free
     Will you come pay respects? Will you not at last see?

Some veterans still suffer disgraceful neglect
So please explain who more deserves our respect
Let us pause with angelic choirs and genuflect
To show gratitude as on this Wall we reflect


Friends, Dane Ann is among those who served in the army during the Vietnam war and is 
now recovering from long-overdue hip surgery performed at an old VA hospital in 
Gainesville, Florida.  Thank you for your prayers on her behalf.  Many thanks 
to Tim Ryerson, another Vietnam veteran, for joining me in this write.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Knop Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 5:23 AM
Carolyn and Tim, you both did a great job on this sad subject! And no it looks like the same will happen again in Iraq and Afghanistan! These wars cannot be won! At that time I did my very best to help young GI's stationed in Germany to save them from being sent to Vietnam and I have taked to a lot of them!...But it is a real shame that the US Govt. forgot about those brave veterans of that unnecessary war. ...Love, Gert
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 8:42 AM
Carolyn, I had to drop low on your list of poems to find one i had not seen yet. wow, how did I miss THIS one?? and how interesting to learn that dane Ann is a VET?? Don't know Tim, but anyway, good job you two did on this poem. Sadly, governments are to blame for all the crap, and our poor soldiers get the burden of it all. Luv, Andrea
Nunn Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 4:28 PM
A fine write about a terrible war,the boys that died and those that came back got screwed, no other way to put it..Thanks on I know where I have been Glad that you like the line "If God Leads you to it...heard that many years ago, dont think that God minded me using it in the poem,,,thanks Danny
Goff Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 12:54 PM
whewww!! this beauty got me long-starin' out the window for a few minutes... just comin' back in! (it's 6-below out there! brrrr!!!!!!).. the same feelin' that created my poem "Mike Never Came Home'' GREAT WRITE! jimbo
Harman Avatar
January 9, 2010 at 9:37 AM
You are the best poet, i have found so far. I have been looking for you. We probably will disagree on many things, but your poetic skill and thoughfulness is off the charts.
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 4:12 PM
My brother is a wounded vet and what you described is as accurate as it gets. Almost every one of my friends who served in Nam have prostrate cancer. Coincidence? I don't believe it. THANK YOU for this one. Vince
George   Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 8:56 AM
Such a heart-wrenching truth. Love, Lainie
Molotsi Avatar
December 27, 2009 at 7:05 AM
This is a tragic and, at the same time, beautiful story. it is written so well
Bolton Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 7:11 PM
Powerful poem to those soldiers who may be the most misunderstood of any veterans. Thanks for sharing
Byrne Avatar
December 20, 2009 at 6:56 PM
Pretty good stuff; very well written !
Shango Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 7:42 AM
Soldiers fight wars they do not make Wars destroy soldiers that time forsake Poets are candles and poems give light To heroes forgotten in the night I honor this tribute and all the memories Of those who serve the lie of countries. Great poem, great write
Austin Avatar
December 16, 2009 at 9:07 AM
Yep! My wife has a friend who suffers terribly from the time he spent in Viet Nam. Will the wars never end? I spent time in service duringt the Korean business, but did no fighting, just spent two years out of my life at a critical time. BIG LOVE, daver
Sweetheart Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 5:56 PM
Feeling poorly but still have to get a post or two in ..this has taken so much out of me whatever it is... getting too old to resist it anymore..haha... thankxxx for your always encouraging comments on my poetry... and will try to call Dane Ann tomorrow if I feel human ... where o where is the Highlander? I just soup mailed him... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie...
Lopez Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 5:01 PM
I too had an unle who served in vietnam. ... wshing Dane Ann all the best! you have done a reat job on these collab pieces ...well done my friend!
Ryusaka Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 4:39 PM
This is a great message! Thanks so much for sharing, you both. I hope he is doing alright.
Hilliker Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 2:23 PM
Tragically true. Carolyn, my thoughts are with you as the anniversary of your father's death creeps up during this holiday season. Best wishes and take good care of yourself.
Fraser Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 12:24 PM
Amazing Quatrain Carolyn & Tim. The VC were quite a formidable fighting force. They took Guerilla warfare to a different level. I wonder how the world would be if America never offered their help in many of the conflicts they became involved in. I don't think it would be as safe as it is. Many other countries could easily have been bullied, just my view. Excellent piece >> James
Loving Iii Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 10:47 AM
how did i know the VA would make you feel this way? i just knew. good work. John H Loving III
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December 15, 2009 at 8:49 AM
THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR KIND WORDS AND comments. I feel very humbled by this poem as well as by those of you who remember those days that can not be erased. I have recovered from my hip surgery. War videos and lost friends will never leave my mind, though. Perhaps that is why my soul pleads for peaceful love one to another, like we find here on the soup. Thanks Carolyn and Tim for keeping us reminded about the pains of war... often emotionally devastating. God Bless U S All with kindness!
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 8:33 AM
Oh my, I am a Vietnam era veteran. And thankfully, have been able to return home after an extensive hip replacement surgery. There were many caretakers and nurses on my hospital stay who went out of their way to make me comfortable. The hospital may be old, but MANY hard working nurses, techs, physicians, cooks, housekeeping folks and others on the team did a great job of making my recovery fast and comfortable. I thank those special good hearted people. And friends at the soup. LOVINGLY,
Strand Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 7:22 AM
Excellent observations Carolyn.Sadly politicians never learn and similar mistakes continue into this decade,ideas cannot be defeated by military power.Rgds Brian & thank you for your kind words and comments today
Sweetheart Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 6:03 AM
Thankxxx for your blog comment... there is always next year for the Bucs... never give up.. I don't ... doc visit today... have reached the intense and extreme with tummy .... blessings... luv..."Sweetie"
Ryerson Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 5:46 AM
This turned out great Carolyn!... Thanks for the honor and privledge of doing this co-write with you. I agree with Mr. Kershaw's exception.... It WAS a winnable war but what caused it to be 'unwinnable' was the reason we sent troops there in the first place.... to 'contain' the advance of Communism, not defeat it. Congress feared angering the Soviet Union and China; which borders Viet Nam (as well as North Korea) thus causing WWIII....Tim
Kershaw Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 12:22 AM
Carolyn, This is an excellent collaborative write. One exception in the contents; Viet Nam was not an unwinnable war. We had adequate men, materiel ammunition and supplies to have ended the war unilaterally at any time during that conflict after 1965. We were not allowed to win by our own congress Excellentlty written though. Love, Will
Owens Avatar
December 14, 2009 at 7:39 PM
Thanks for this write...Very deserving...Marty
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