Vietnam and the Grace of God.. Another Fallen Marine

VIETNAM and the GRACE OF GOD.. “ another fallen marine” The daughter of a lucky Vietnam marine, his only child is my husband you see lucky because he made it out alive, aware of the alternative.. as he watched buddies die. Some days for hours I’d listen to stories many times in disbelief………… it wasn’t until he pulled out his pictures that he made a believer of me. Enemy fire, hell in the jungle, and finely beyond the grenades, I remember him saying it was by the grace of GOD, the reason their Asses were saved. Proud they were and lucky to go home, now here we are, fourty years down the road. While my husband, our daughter, his mother and I, feel very fortunate to have been a part of his life As luck would have it.. this cliché is a lie, those who felt lucky never had luck on their side. A soldier selflessly sacrifices life some were called quickly and others over time. Dad was a marine during the Vietnam War standing front line and center, freedom at the core Positioned in the jungle, men were exposed It’s silent, and brewing, agent orange as we know. Agent Orange is the reason so doctors have said, that caused the cancer and the death of our dad. A MAN of all MEN he will always be known as another fallen marine has been called home.
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Freeman Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 8:58 AM
A beautiful rhyming tribute to all the brave souls that enforced all our freedoms Donna!!! Brings tears to my eyes in remembrance of all the sacrificies made. Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
September 11, 2010 at 6:37 AM
Great tribute to our men and women that have servered our country...I have just been reading about agent orange..That was one chemical that caused many different diseases on our men and women..Sara
Culverhouse Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 6:54 PM
Great tribute to your dad and all soldiers!
Neels Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 6:16 PM
Donna, this is a beautiful write in tribute to your dad and a stark reminder of the reality that goes with war.. A reality thats always been shaded or hidden.. Great write ~ Wilma
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 4:57 AM
This is a very beautiful and poignant poem. My thanks to Robert for leading me here to read it. You honor these soldiers with this wonderful tribute and they all deserve it!
Scott Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 10:16 PM
bravo Donna, I myself had a relative who died from this, as did a lot of our brave enlisted men..well written
Dufresne Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 4:55 AM
Hello Donna, thanks for the comment. You have soup mail.
Haick Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 12:00 PM
A wonderful tribute to your Dad, Donna. He was a victim, as all his brothers who suffered and died in vain. I'm sure he smiled as you finished this! Great work...Love, Audrey
Devonshire Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 10:32 AM
Very powerful and moving, Donna! I'm so sorry you lost your father to the effects of Agent Orange. A wonderful poem! Love and blessings, Carolyn
Roberts Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 8:39 AM
wonderful poem with such a strong message, it was disgusting the way soldiers were intentionally placed in harms way by their own government in the vietnam war.
Gorelick Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 8:18 AM
A great poem full of sadness...The aftermath of that terrible time..BG
Dufresne Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 7:20 AM
What an awesome write and reminder of a reality that is often downplayed and forgotten.This should be edited a little for clarity and published in many magazines like The American Legion, VFW, DAV and any other magazine that has the sense and sensitivity to print it so as many poeple as possible can see it. Thank you Donna.
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