Victory Holds the Keys Turning

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hypocrites puts on a false face appearing a veiled person

whom acts in direct contradiction against lawful manners

one can see what ices the cake underneath the layers

So many people in this modern world lost souls testing our faith pretending to have virtues locked inside a shell hallowed Their moral rights have become so twisted with hidden lies they have lost all values when it comes to highlighting the truth trying to justify their own hidden weakness The false appearance of love and caring has a deluded vision creatures of habit attack religious beliefs creating division condemning them unholy characterised by delusional ideas of judgement falling down tortured by sin craving attention There is a price to be paid one way or the other blindsided by the deceiver they are the tool Destroying principles believing something that is untrue misery always loves company punishing the good wickedness has no mercy when it comes to the suffering innocent The price of such a shame will come with chaos and discomfort in the end we all know who wins

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Harry Horsman

Date: 7/5/2020 10:14:00 PM

Astute poetry, Liam, you are so right, but does seem so many can hide behind, hypocrisy these days.

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/30/2020 12:20:00 PM

We've come a long way Liam... thanks to the 10 commandments we have a system to follow...otherwise the world's situation would be much worse...I can see the ascension is painful... but love will win...Nice one my friend

Sandra Adams

Date: 6/28/2020 10:26:00 PM

it is so sad that they are attacking the church, the children, the elderly... the world has gone made with this current agenda, but he will win in the end... wonderful penning my friend! hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/28/2020 5:13:00 PM

Those who attack the church and its representatives attack God himself. The immoral will never inherit the earth for it belongs to the virtuous my friend, Liam. A powerful write! God bless you brother!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/28/2020 3:16:00 PM

Yet another write in potent words-- makes your case brilliantly, Liam. Intensity of your verses resonate to make an impact. Hope they heed your warning.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 6/28/2020 3:38:00 PM

thank you kindly vijay for your wonderful comment bless you, smiling we all live in hope for a better future wishing you a wonderful week

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/28/2020 2:43:00 PM

Hello Liam Mate!! The words and theme of your latest free verse here say it all!! Well-said and powerfully articulated. What you speak of can certainly apply to all countries and societies worldwide. "Hypocrisy" without a doubt is alive and running rampant in our modern world of today. All the best to you and your family my great friend!! (I plan to give you a call here very soon!!) Cheers and Best, Gary

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 6/28/2020 3:00:00 PM

thank you deeply brother looking forward to your call, this piece was fired reading words from a political point of view, filled with bullet holes it carried the fraud based signature from hell, you know me gary it always has a deep undertone smiling