Notes About The Poem

 hypocrites puts on a false face appearing a veiled person

whom acts in direct contradiction against lawful manners 

one can see what ices the cake underneath the layers 

 

Victory Holds the Keys Turning

So many people in this modern world lost souls testing our faith
pretending to have virtues locked inside a shell hallowed
Their moral rights have become so twisted with hidden lies
they have lost all values when it comes to highlighting the truth
trying to justify their own hidden weakness
The false appearance of love and caring has a deluded vision
creatures of habit attack religious beliefs
creating division condemning them unholy
characterised by delusional ideas of judgement
falling down tortured by sin craving attention
There is a price to be paid one way or the other
blindsided by the deceiver they are the tool
Destroying principles believing something that is untrue
misery always loves company punishing the good
wickedness has no mercy when it comes to the suffering innocent
The price of such a shame will come with chaos and discomfort
in the end we all know who wins
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Horsman Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 10:14 PM
Astute poetry, Liam, you are so right, but does seem so many can hide behind, hypocrisy these days.
Michael Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 12:20 PM
We've come a long way Liam... thanks to the 10 commandments we have a system to follow...otherwise the world's situation would be much worse...I can see the ascension is painful... but love will win...Nice one my friend
Adams Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 10:26 PM
it is so sad that they are attacking the church, the children, the elderly... the world has gone made with this current agenda, but he will win in the end... wonderful penning my friend! hugs
Trifiatis Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 5:13 PM
Those who attack the church and its representatives attack God himself. The immoral will never inherit the earth for it belongs to the virtuous my friend, Liam. A powerful write! God bless you brother!
Pandit Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 3:16 PM
Yet another write in potent words-- makes your case brilliantly, Liam. Intensity of your verses resonate to make an impact. Hope they heed your warning.
Mcdaid Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 3:38 PM
thank you kindly vijay for your wonderful comment bless you, smiling we all live in hope for a better future wishing you a wonderful week
Bateman Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 2:43 PM
Hello Liam Mate!! The words and theme of your latest free verse here say it all!! Well-said and powerfully articulated. What you speak of can certainly apply to all countries and societies worldwide. "Hypocrisy" without a doubt is alive and running rampant in our modern world of today. All the best to you and your family my great friend!! (I plan to give you a call here very soon!!) Cheers and Best, Gary
Mcdaid Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 3:00 PM
thank you deeply brother looking forward to your call, this piece was fired reading words from a political point of view, filled with bullet holes it carried the fraud based signature from hell, you know me gary it always has a deep undertone smiling
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