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Victory

The Jockey tasted victory

In the last leg of the race
As the horse picked up her pace
And the favourite took first place
By the nose upon her face.


For Brian’s contest:   “Rhyme Time”

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Poet Destroyer A October 31, 2011 at 6:10 PM MARGARET, Congratulations on your featured poem of the week.. take care and have yourself a safe and fun Halloween night,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown October 31, 2011 at 12:26 PM Congratulations on your well deserving poetry being featured this week Margaret. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 31, 2011 at 9:52 AM Congrats Margaret on featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful write to share with luv..

Connie Marcum Wong February 1, 2010 at 12:41 PM You sure chose the right title here Margaret. I am so happy this won as I found it delightful. Congratulations! Blessings, Connie

Brandee Augustus January 20, 2010 at 2:08 PM Congratulations on placing in Brian's eap contest!

Andrea Dietrich January 20, 2010 at 1:23 PM don't think I congratulated you yet. I loved this one, so playful.

Audrey Haick January 19, 2010 at 4:09 PM Hey, Margaret! Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Rhyme Time" Contest! Great job! Peace, Audrey

Joyce Johnson January 19, 2010 at 11:54 AM Very good. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 19, 2010 at 12:12 AM Nice eap rhyme, Margaret. I like the visions created by these words... Nice! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Carrie Richards January 18, 2010 at 7:41 AM I loved this delightful entry! Congratulations on this well deserved win!! ~ love, Carrie

Robert A. Dufresne January 18, 2010 at 5:51 AM My wife esp. is an avid horse fan. she esp. loved this one, Margaret. Thanks from her too!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 18, 2010 at 4:21 AM Congratulations Margaret, on your placement in Brian Strand's “Rhyme Time” contest with this wonderful Victory eap poem. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your poetic light is bright. Smiles, DAS-J

Robert A. Dufresne January 17, 2010 at 4:49 PM nice one Margaret! Congratulations on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 17, 2010 at 1:18 PM Congrats Margaret on your winning poem in Brian's contest... great theme and well written too... I just luv horses myself so I thoroughly enjoyed this read... luv.. Linda-Marie

January 17, 2010 at 10:53 AM Enjoyed this one. You have me smiling. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

Carolyn Devonshire January 17, 2010 at 9:34 AM This is awesome and very original, Margaret! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Elaine George January 17, 2010 at 9:14 AM Clever and witty Margaret. Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's contest. Love, Lainie

Brian Strand January 17, 2010 at 8:59 AM Congrats on your success in my contest Margaret.Rgds Brian .My latest contest POETRY OF THE NOUN is now open.

Andrea Dietrich January 16, 2010 at 6:29 PM VERY good, I bet you are gonna place high with this one! Luv, andrea

Linda Witt-King January 16, 2010 at 12:46 PM Very clever Margaret...a woman after my own heart. I love a great horse race.

Brian Strand January 16, 2010 at 12:39 AM Thank you for supporting my contest Margaret.Rgds Brian

P Sheart January 15, 2010 at 7:21 PM Hi Margaret, A very well written poem. It paints a vivid picture with good rhyme. Enjoyed! This will make a wonderful entry in Brian's contest. Best of luck! Thanks for sharing. Love Light Patty

Marty Owens January 15, 2010 at 6:20 PM Very nice...good luck in the contest...Marty

Carrie Richards January 15, 2010 at 5:42 PM You did it! And did it well....this is a delightful list poem! Good luck in the contest! ~ Carrie

John Freeman January 15, 2010 at 5:33 PM This is neat Margaret. Good luck in contest. Sincerely, Love, Moses