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Victory

The Jockey tasted victory In the last leg of the race As the horse picked up her pace And the favourite took first place By the nose upon her face. For Brian’s contest: “Rhyme Time” humourous

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/31/2011 6:10:00 PM
MARGARET, Congratulations on your featured poem of the week.. take care and have yourself a safe and fun Halloween night,..p.d.
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Date: 10/31/2011 12:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserving poetry being featured this week Margaret. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/31/2011 9:52:00 AM
Congrats Margaret on featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful write to share with luv..
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Date: 2/1/2010 12:41:00 PM
You sure chose the right title here Margaret. I am so happy this won as I found it delightful. Congratulations! Blessings, Connie
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Date: 1/20/2010 2:08:00 PM
Congratulations on placing in Brian's eap contest!
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Date: 1/20/2010 1:23:00 PM
don't think I congratulated you yet. I loved this one, so playful.
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Date: 1/19/2010 4:09:00 PM
Hey, Margaret! Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Rhyme Time" Contest! Great job! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/19/2010 11:54:00 AM
Very good. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/19/2010 12:12:00 AM
Nice eap rhyme, Margaret. I like the visions created by these words... Nice! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/18/2010 7:41:00 AM
I loved this delightful entry! Congratulations on this well deserved win!! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 1/18/2010 5:51:00 AM
My wife esp. is an avid horse fan. she esp. loved this one, Margaret. Thanks from her too!
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Date: 1/18/2010 4:21:00 AM
Congratulations Margaret, on your placement in Brian Strand's “Rhyme Time” contest with this wonderful Victory eap poem. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your poetic light is bright. Smiles, DAS-J
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Date: 1/17/2010 4:49:00 PM
nice one Margaret! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/17/2010 1:18:00 PM
Congrats Margaret on your winning poem in Brian's contest... great theme and well written too... I just luv horses myself so I thoroughly enjoyed this read... luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/17/2010 10:53:00 AM
Enjoyed this one. You have me smiling. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 1/17/2010 9:34:00 AM
This is awesome and very original, Margaret! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/17/2010 9:14:00 AM
Clever and witty Margaret. Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/17/2010 8:59:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Margaret.Rgds Brian .My latest contest POETRY OF THE NOUN is now open.
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Date: 1/16/2010 6:29:00 PM
VERY good, I bet you are gonna place high with this one! Luv, andrea
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Date: 1/16/2010 12:46:00 PM
Very clever Margaret...a woman after my own heart. I love a great horse race.
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Date: 1/16/2010 12:39:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Margaret.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/15/2010 7:21:00 PM
Hi Margaret, A very well written poem. It paints a vivid picture with good rhyme. Enjoyed! This will make a wonderful entry in Brian's contest. Best of luck! Thanks for sharing. Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/15/2010 6:20:00 PM
Very nice...good luck in the contest...Marty
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Date: 1/15/2010 5:42:00 PM
You did it! And did it well....this is a delightful list poem! Good luck in the contest! ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/15/2010 5:33:00 PM
This is neat Margaret. Good luck in contest. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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