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Victorious Love

"Victorious Love" bleeding wounds of broken flesh stained wooden cross crown of thorns imprinted pain upon His Head scattered pieces of red robe gambled for toss sword pierced side as water flowed proclaiming dead. agonizing death laid in cold darkened tomb tears cascading sorrow from a Mother's womb. broken promises appeared to fade away love defeated death in bright sunshine array. in fabric of intense love lies mystery infusing scattered heartache makes one stronger Deity broke pattern for hate to steal glee delicate woven tapestry lives longer. though pedestal may shatter as fragile glass while harsh wors will hurt deeply as sounding brass. victory in love and life feels forgiveness restoring souls to heavenly happiness. *For Gail Angel Doyle's Picking Up Broken Pieces Contest. *Written by: Linda-Marie The "Sweetheart" of P.S.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/13/2014 3:05:00 AM
love the poem... ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/31/2012 8:41:00 AM
Hai, Linda... This is a great write. And congrats in the big win :)
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Date: 10/30/2012 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in "Picking Up The Broken Pieces" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/30/2012 8:29:00 AM
Wow! It am lazy, really lazy, missed to read this wonderful poem. Last two lines are concluded with the real concept. Lovely done, my genius friend. Always, bl
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Date: 10/30/2012 2:19:00 AM
Well done, enjoyed the read. Seren
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Date: 10/29/2012 10:55:00 PM
WON 3RD PLACE ... THANKXXX
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Date: 10/29/2012 8:48:00 PM
Hi Sweet Linda, my bff... i see another win for you... wow..you are on a roll.. good night...PD
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Date: 10/29/2012 5:15:00 PM
Great writing Linda Marie. Congratulations. Happy to share a spot with you. Love, joyce
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Date: 10/29/2012 4:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gail's "Broken Pieces" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/24/2012 4:19:00 AM
wonderful and a very profound poem, Sweetheart,, love the sincerity here....
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Date: 10/22/2012 7:51:00 AM
‡ "Divinely Beautiful." When I Consider The Endless Array Of Things, Which Make Your Priceless Heart Ever Sooo Radiantly Beautiful, Sweet Beautiful, Beyound Beautiful Linda Marie, This, 'Your Soulfelt Faith,' Is High To Be Cherished, Among They. Angels, Smile As 'Your Beauty Glows.' My Love To You, Rachel ‡
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Date: 10/21/2012 6:46:00 PM
a very positive look at life with your eloquent handling of the theme, sweets.. i'm rooting for you!.. how's the new baby?;;).. congrats on all your recent wins, luv!... so many relatives and siblings from abroad now here; my older sis is celebrating her 25th wedding... huggs!
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Date: 10/21/2012 6:36:00 PM
Wow! A great masterpiece my dear friend, Linda -M. I love it especially the last two lines! This is a winner for sure! Well here's my best wishes of good luck always! Thank you so much for sharing and your congratulatory comments on my poem. Love/hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/21/2012 1:57:00 PM
Great work that expresses your faith..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 10/21/2012 12:53:00 PM
A very good poem - A winner Linda-Marie .... Good luck in the contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/21/2012 12:15:00 PM
I really enjoyed your tremendous Rispettos that you have written my friend! You have completed some very delightful and intensely important writes Linda-Marie! What a powerful group of poems, written so perfectly, fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/21/2012 12:13:00 PM
Hi Linda, my bfffffff... how are you this wonderful lovely Sunday afternoon... I'm enjoying the refreshing happiness that brought victorious love to your life, a nice way to hand out some love...good luck in the contest...always...your bff .. :-) pd
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Date: 10/21/2012 11:40:00 AM
LOVE BEGINS WITH GOD AND NEVER ENDS WITH LUV IN LIFE OF HAPPINESS .. ENJOY ON THIS SUPER SUNDAY WITH LUV ..POETS
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