Victoria Terrace

(An Addingham Poem)

With the strength of
gentleness, sparrows make love
upon the windowsill,
frigid glass pane pulsates
within the pageant of nature,
numerous battle scared plumage
float wanting, towards earthly cracks
that conceals another world, where
rain and sleet beat down a
forest of subversive weeds,
if only to perjure
hope and fortitude.
The wind! Screams imperfections,
orchestrates the misery of the
telegraph wire, summons
the hardy, those across the
sawmill dam, there where the
village sons live on, as faceless
images upon the park epitaph.
The moon abandons the paperboy
hides behind a turbulent haze,
the greyness segregating
the dawn from the night,
as a hundred kettles sing
behind dimly lit backyard windows,
and a hundred harmonies
perfume, the bowel of the tippler.
Row upon row of decrepit
doorsteps host resident jugs, those
that waits in anticipation of the ladle,
whose wholesome contents still
encompass the warmth of the beast.
Through the mist, a stony siren
executes the industrial anthem,
a musical excursion into pain
and manipulation, a weaving shed
that creates a spinneret
of dreams, a threshold to one’s hopes.
“Yet! Given nothing more, than a
wry sense of insecurity.”

 © Harry J Horsman 1999

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/15/2020 7:46:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Harry :)
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Date: 10/14/2020 10:14:00 PM
Lovely writing, Harry... "a weaving shed that creates a spinneret of dreams"! Congrats to you for today's #1 placement in Brian's contest. Keep writing, my friend ~ John
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Date: 7/17/2016 8:06:00 PM
Harry, congrats on your placement in BW's contest with this descriptive write! Blessings!
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Date: 12/18/2012 11:09:00 AM
Yet!!!! i love this image once again.. the steady Victorian view. A poem so perfect, it giveth all the waits in anticipation. Love the harmony one can find in the aroma of your poem. Some insecurities are over built. love this Terrace imperfect ways of ways...pd
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Date: 12/18/2012 11:09:00 AM
soup mail
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Date: 9/22/2012 12:57:00 PM
now that you explained they were milk jugs, that part makes a lot more sense. hahaha (and the beasts being the cows!!)
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Date: 9/21/2012 9:46:00 PM
gosh, this starts out as a nature poem and then winds its way to the dismal picture of those host resident jugs (am I guessing correctly that they are bums?) You have such a poetic way of seeing the world, , from the minute details of glorious nature to the misery of man. And all wrapped up in that sense of "insecurity" something I have come to know too well! I stumbled on this gem thinking I had already seen nearly everything on this page!!
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Date: 8/8/2010 11:33:00 PM
Another compelling write Harry, I love the imagery, hope you had an awesome weekend.. Thank you for your comments always ~ Wilma
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:15:00 AM
Good morning Harry, wow!!! on your poetry, enjoyed the way your poem took me to that special place of imagination. Awesome how your words can lead right to the picture even though you have many tight metaphors in this one. Have yourself a wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 8/7/2010 7:48:00 AM
Really brilliant and remarkable write, this is really Soup Mail, Harry! Thank you also for your friendly comment and have a great Sunday!....Gert
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Date: 8/7/2010 7:21:00 AM
Brilliant, descriptive and vivid imagery throughout this entire compelling poem. The last two lines are chilling and so true. Thank you for sharing this awesome poem, Harry. Love, Carolyn
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