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Victim Or Victor

Victim or Victor As we move forward in tetrametric time And we seize the momentous moment With words that floral in their rhyme A tenacious tapestry of the modern poet “To be... or... not to be” A quarrel of the moral We play with our destiny And present our worldly choral “I think...therefore...I am” So I may ponder that I don’t exist Are we lion or are we lamb Poetic verses in the misty mist Momentous movements of words in play For they always speak of bright and gray. Sept.08.2016 Victim Or Victor - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 9/10/2016 11:18:00 PM
Wow, this poem is so impressive. Your first stanza grabbed my attention and held it! Brilliant WW! 7 ; )
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Date: 9/10/2016 10:02:00 AM
very nicely done, Winged Warrior. This has great flow and I love the quote of To be or not to be" discussed in your message.
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Date: 9/8/2016 11:48:00 PM
Great write....
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Date: 9/8/2016 5:19:00 PM
Pretty deep write Wingman! At least for an old country boy like me. At this moment my grey matter is in a gray area. Lol Good luck in contest!
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Date: 9/8/2016 12:49:00 PM
Very well done and Quoted, ^WW^, good luck in the contest. Hugs
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