Victim Or Victor

Victim or Victor

As we move forward in tetrametric time
And we seize the momentous moment
With words that floral in their rhyme
A tenacious tapestry of the modern poet

“To be... or... not to be”
A quarrel of the moral
We play with our destiny
And present our worldly choral

“I think...therefore...I am”
So I may ponder that I don’t exist
Are we lion or are we lamb
Poetic verses in the misty mist

Momentous movements of words in play
For they always speak of bright and gray.


Sept.08.2016
Victim Or Victor - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/10/2016 11:18:00 PM
Wow, this poem is so impressive. Your first stanza grabbed my attention and held it! Brilliant WW! 7 ; )
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Date: 9/10/2016 10:02:00 AM
very nicely done, Winged Warrior. This has great flow and I love the quote of To be or not to be" discussed in your message.
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Date: 9/8/2016 11:48:00 PM
Great write....
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Date: 9/8/2016 5:19:00 PM
Pretty deep write Wingman! At least for an old country boy like me. At this moment my grey matter is in a gray area. Lol Good luck in contest!
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Date: 9/8/2016 12:49:00 PM
Very well done and Quoted, ^WW^, good luck in the contest. Hugs
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