Victim of the Dam

I once knew a cat from Siam 
Who was the wife of the cat "Sam I Am" 
 
I found me her daughter
On a raft in the water

But I lost her
When she fell over the dam
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Stebbings Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 7:09 AM
Nice word play, Charles. I see you have a win with this one, Congrats. // Barry
Messina Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 10:07 AM
Thank you Barry...// Charlie
Roper Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 11:07 AM
Congratulation on this wonderful cute write ... Hugs Eve
Messina Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 6:37 AM
Thank you so much! Have a wonderful day, Eve...Back at you with the hugs...Charlie
Gauthier Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 8:49 PM
Congrats on your win, Charles. The rhyme is right on.
Messina Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 8:06 AM
Thanks Line, back at you as well!
Y. Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 5:47 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
Messina Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 8:07 AM
Thank you so much Alexis! It was a fun contest and I really appreciate your kindness in giving me a placement! All the best...Charlie
Allison Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 2:30 PM
clever limerick Charles, Many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
Messina Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 8:08 AM
Hi Jan, hope your felling well...Thanks so much, and back at you...Hugs // Charlie xx
Gentry Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 2:18 PM
Congratulations on your win with this fun comedy movie limerick!
Messina Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 8:10 AM
Hi Susan, Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kindness...All the best, Charlie
Duet Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 10:28 PM
So clever and cute! (soup mail)
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