Victim of the Dam

I once knew a cat from Siam 
Who was the wife of the cat "Sam I Am" 
 
I found me her daughter
On a raft in the water

But I lost her
When she fell over the dam
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 7/1/2018 7:09:00 AM
Nice word play, Charles. I see you have a win with this one, Congrats. // Barry
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Charles Messina
Date: 7/1/2018 10:07:00 AM
Thank you Barry...// Charlie
Date: 5/22/2018 11:07:00 AM
Congratulation on this wonderful cute write ... Hugs Eve
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Charles Messina
Date: 5/23/2018 6:37:00 AM
Thank you so much! Have a wonderful day, Eve...Back at you with the hugs...Charlie
Date: 5/20/2018 8:49:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Charles. The rhyme is right on.
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Charles Messina
Date: 5/21/2018 8:06:00 AM
Thanks Line, back at you as well!
Date: 5/20/2018 5:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
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Charles Messina
Date: 5/21/2018 8:07:00 AM
Thank you so much Alexis! It was a fun contest and I really appreciate your kindness in giving me a placement! All the best...Charlie
Date: 5/20/2018 2:30:00 PM
clever limerick Charles, Many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Charles Messina
Date: 5/21/2018 8:08:00 AM
Hi Jan, hope your felling well...Thanks so much, and back at you...Hugs // Charlie xx
Date: 5/20/2018 2:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this fun comedy movie limerick!
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Charles Messina
Date: 5/21/2018 8:10:00 AM
Hi Susan, Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kindness...All the best, Charlie
Date: 4/13/2018 10:28:00 PM
So clever and cute! (soup mail)
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