Vexation In the Garden

where shall I run
if the dormant grass remains
to prick my bare soles
as I scurry to the other side
in pursuit of this child
whom I would give my very life
though her life may not mirror my own

the string in her hand
that balloon in the sky
seem so simple at sunset

the clouds agree 
not to deter this memory
with lightning, thunder
and tears

twilight would never lie
soot of man can touch tomorrow
when tomorrow 
touches her, I pray
it is with hands 
as gentle, as mine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Wilae Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 9:24 PM
What a beautiful reflection of love for a child, daughter, and life. I absolutely love your imagery.
Evans Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 6:45 PM
Thanks lady. This poem was written with the heart. Thanks again..............peace!
Mccall Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 7:22 PM
This is so beautiful Richard so well penned One can't help but have a tear in their eye after reading this.
Evans Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 7:44 AM
Ed that darn grandchild inspires me to no end. All the best..............peace!
Whitmore Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 7:12 PM
A vision of a child in the sun holding a balloon comes to mind. An excellent poem that has great lines which casts a scene. Great poem!
Evans Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 7:43 AM
A friend said I should write more topical poems dealing with current events but my family is my main muse. I'm at an artistic crossroad and I love it.
One Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 3:15 PM
This is wonderful...
Evans Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 7:41 AM
Thank you S.O. All the best.
Downing  Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 5:51 PM
Just lovely Richard... hugs and smiles :)
Evans Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 7:40 AM
Thanks lady. This poem literally fell out the sky. Thanks again.
Cresswell Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 1:07 PM
A great write a father to his child. tomorrow may bring its worst but your love will always intercede.
Evans Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 1:36 PM
Nothing inspires me more than family. Thanks for stopping by.................peace!
Lu Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 4:12 AM
a poem full of love and care and tender....best wishes.
Evans Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 1:41 PM
I was thinking about global warming as well as family when I wrote this poem. Thanks Stina.
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