Vessel Sank

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08/02/23

VESSEL SANK Sea wasn't turbulent. Wonderful largest liner floated just safely. Luxurious cruise started. Tension-free vessel took affluent passengers in joyful voyage. Suddenly it was hit by a hidden ice berg. Rush of water flow flooded deck causing ship wreck. To accommodate each one, not enough life boats. Signal claiming help didn't work. Captain Smith only prayed in vain till his last breathe. Titanic just sank . Helpless souls in mass to face tragic destined death. Ship Carpathia sent to rescue, reached too late. Weeping women and children. to be carried by few life boats that still floating. Carpathia sighed. No trace of Titanic seen.

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