Very Little Strife Conceived Of

Spring's warm sun arouses mother earth 
To send forth buds and flowers' blooms
From the womb expectantly awaiting birth
Everywhere mothers await the day abloom

First a little green shoot then a flower's petal
Then the lovers' around will fly_bees, butterflies
Gathering nectar and pollen to spread accidental
Soon young girl is ready to have wedding anxieties

Nature has a way of maturing the flowers
A little rain, sun, and nourishing food
Weddings and responsibilities maturing powers
A little romance, a little love, a little being shrewd

The first stage of life for nature and all above
Mostly pleasure very little strife conceived of

(I am stilling working on this one)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 2/11/2011 8:23:00 AM
very well put I would find this very fitting in most of my opinions on life and love
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Date: 2/11/2011 7:38:00 AM
Sara, I absolutely love what you have done so far.. Can't wait to read the finish product.. Enjoy the weekend ahead ;)
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Date: 2/11/2011 7:07:00 AM
Nature enjoyed in all it's glory with your lovely words Sara... appreciate the welcome words of Spring .. soon to be here my friend with joy.. and luv..
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Date: 2/10/2011 8:31:00 PM
Well done, just wonderful, I am having difficulty with this form and the third element thing, , but you got it perfect~~
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