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Very First Date Contest

I had a couple of dates in grade school, but I don't count them, since they were pointless. My real first date went something like this. I was a 14 year old freshmen and she was a 17 year old junior. I was a football player, she was a cheerleader. Together we went to the movies, but she made all the moves on me. I was lost in world of disarray. After the movies she asked what I wanted to do. It didn't matter to me, I could have died happy there. She drove to a spot over looking the city. We talked and she asked if I liked baseball and I said sure. Then she said, wanna try for second and maybe steal third? As my heart was pounding, I looked at her and said, I would love to do that for you, but I can't, I play football. Looking back, I think I messed that up.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/16/2011 7:54:00 AM
hahahaha, Surely you were kidding in this one?? If not, you were refreshingly naive. And if you were kidding us, what a GREAT way to do the contest! A big congrats for a great story telling!
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Date: 7/15/2011 3:40:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Carol, Chris
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Date: 7/15/2011 1:57:00 PM
Congrats Chris on your stellar second place in first date with this dynamic delight of a write luv..
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Date: 7/15/2011 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest and thank you for supporting my contest Chris. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 6:25:00 PM
this is great good luck to you in the contest. cory
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Date: 6/28/2011 6:37:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Chris. Love, Carol
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