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Very Basic Me

all i can be sure 
       i’m alive so must exist
        had no choice in this 
     instinct urges me forward 
   intelligence brings my doubt


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David Kavanagh

how i feelintrospectionlifetanka

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Linda Alice Fowler

February 11, 2021 at 9:49 AM

Great insight David. Linda

Sand Blown

February 5, 2021 at 11:18 AM

...yessir...the nature of time 'wrights' all ......stan sand

David Kavanagh

February 5, 2021 at 11:26 AM

Sure does Stan, whilst instinct and intelligence battles it out, cheers David

Robert Pettit

February 4, 2021 at 6:15 PM

You are in the same boat with countless other individuals in this world. Your tanka says plenty.

David Kavanagh

February 4, 2021 at 11:45 PM

Thank you Robert was just making a very basic statement, exposing myself to all I can be sure of, it’s a very stripped back view, unfortunately it’s a very common held universal truth, and the more I search for answers, the more doubts I seem to come across, this view is not meant to represent everyone, others see things differently and I’m fine with that, cheers David

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