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Very Basic Me

all i can be sure i’m alive so must exist had no choice in this instinct urges me forward intelligence brings my doubt By David Kavanagh

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/11/2021 9:49:00 AM

Great insight David. Linda

Sand Blown

Date: 2/5/2021 11:18:00 AM

...yessir...the nature of time 'wrights' all ......stan sand

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/5/2021 11:26:00 AM

Sure does Stan, whilst instinct and intelligence battles it out, cheers David

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/4/2021 6:15:00 PM

You are in the same boat with countless other individuals in this world. Your tanka says plenty.

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 11:45:00 PM

Thank you Robert was just making a very basic statement, exposing myself to all I can be sure of, it’s a very stripped back view, unfortunately it’s a very common held universal truth, and the more I search for answers, the more doubts I seem to come across, this view is not meant to represent everyone, others see things differently and I’m fine with that, cheers David