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Aha, plumb at last Eventually reaching, Perpendicular

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/11/2014 8:48:00 PM
You measure this poem correctly! Keep 'em coming! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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James Fraser
Date: 8/14/2014 3:59:00 PM
Thank you Matthew, James :)
Date: 8/8/2014 8:17:00 PM
this is a really COOL HAIKU. Congrats.
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James Fraser
Date: 8/8/2014 8:23:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I loved writing this poem, as it allowed the writer to! - have a lovely weekend, James ......:)
Date: 8/8/2014 2:29:00 PM
the prince does it again.. huge congrats!.. huggs
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James Fraser
Date: 8/8/2014 4:12:00 PM
Thank you Princess. It's always a Buzz to have ones poems read and liked. Warm ((( hugs ))) winging their way on a South East breeze, and once they reach, you'll know by your trees. For it's thermals shall play, a Scottish Melody, leaves gently saying, the above words that I say :)
Date: 8/8/2014 11:46:00 AM
- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)
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James Fraser
Date: 8/8/2014 4:04:00 PM
Many thanks Anne-Lise, always appreciated are your comments, James :)
Date: 8/8/2014 10:35:00 AM
Mmmn I remember skiing!!!!! But it's more!!!kudos:)
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James Fraser
Date: 8/8/2014 3:58:00 PM
The wonder of words, do they mean what they. Or are they meaning, a totally different display! - Thank you Olive for your always kind comments. Have a most lovely weekend, James :)
Date: 8/8/2014 1:19:00 AM
Very clever thought penned well, James. congrats
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James Fraser
Date: 8/8/2014 3:53:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Ram - I so enjoy your comments, James.
Date: 8/2/2014 2:32:00 PM
Brilliant.. If they get it
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James Fraser
Date: 8/2/2014 2:39:00 PM
Time will tell Dave! - James :)
Date: 8/2/2014 1:48:00 PM
- Bravo, great haiku James !! - Good luck in the contest! - Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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James Fraser
Date: 8/2/2014 1:55:00 PM
Many thanks Anne Lise,your lovely comments are always a joy to read. Happy Weekend also, James :)
Date: 8/2/2014 1:30:00 PM
wonderful take for a 'ku, prince... the interpretations here are endless... huggs
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James Fraser
Date: 8/2/2014 1:33:00 PM
Thank you Princess, love your comments, and indeed, interpretations are worth the pondering, James (((( hugs )))) back, xx :)