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Vertical Challenge

Aha, plumb at last Eventually reaching, Perpendicular

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Matthew Anish

Date: 8/11/2014 8:48:00 PM

You measure this poem correctly! Keep 'em coming! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

James Fraser
Date: 8/14/2014 3:59:00 PM

Thank you Matthew, James :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2014 8:17:00 PM

this is a really COOL HAIKU. Congrats.

James Fraser
Date: 8/8/2014 8:23:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. I loved writing this poem, as it allowed the writer to! - have a lovely weekend, James ......:)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/8/2014 2:29:00 PM

the prince does it again.. huge congrats!.. huggs

James Fraser
Date: 8/8/2014 4:12:00 PM

Thank you Princess. It's always a Buzz to have ones poems read and liked. Warm ((( hugs ))) winging their way on a South East breeze, and once they reach, you'll know by your trees. For it's thermals shall play, a Scottish Melody, leaves gently saying, the above words that I say :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/8/2014 11:46:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)

James Fraser
Date: 8/8/2014 4:04:00 PM

Many thanks Anne-Lise, always appreciated are your comments, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/8/2014 10:35:00 AM

Mmmn I remember skiing!!!!! But it's more!!!kudos:)

James Fraser
Date: 8/8/2014 3:58:00 PM

The wonder of words, do they mean what they. Or are they meaning, a totally different display! - Thank you Olive for your always kind comments. Have a most lovely weekend, James :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2014 1:19:00 AM

Very clever thought penned well, James. congrats

James Fraser
Date: 8/8/2014 3:53:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Ram - I so enjoy your comments, James.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/2/2014 1:48:00 PM

- Bravo, great haiku James !! - Good luck in the contest! - Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Fraser
Date: 8/2/2014 1:55:00 PM

Many thanks Anne Lise,your lovely comments are always a joy to read. Happy Weekend also, James :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/2/2014 1:30:00 PM

wonderful take for a 'ku, prince... the interpretations here are endless... huggs

James Fraser
Date: 8/2/2014 1:33:00 PM

Thank you Princess, love your comments, and indeed, interpretations are worth the pondering, James (((( hugs )))) back, xx :)