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Aha, plumb at last Eventually reaching, Perpendicular
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Anish Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 8:48 PM
You measure this poem correctly! Keep 'em coming! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Fraser Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 3:59 PM
Thank you Matthew, James :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 8:17 PM
this is a really COOL HAIKU. Congrats.
Fraser Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 8:23 PM
Thank you Andrea. I loved writing this poem, as it allowed the writer to! - have a lovely weekend, James ......:)
Onclaud Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 2:29 PM
the prince does it again.. huge congrats!.. huggs
Fraser Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 4:12 PM
Thank you Princess. It's always a Buzz to have ones poems read and liked. Warm ((( hugs ))) winging their way on a South East breeze, and once they reach, you'll know by your trees. For it's thermals shall play, a Scottish Melody, leaves gently saying, the above words that I say :)
Andresen Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 11:46 AM
- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)
Fraser Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 4:04 PM
Many thanks Anne-Lise, always appreciated are your comments, James :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 10:35 AM
Mmmn I remember skiing!!!!! But it's more!!!kudos:)
Fraser Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 3:58 PM
The wonder of words, do they mean what they. Or are they meaning, a totally different display! - Thank you Olive for your always kind comments. Have a most lovely weekend, James :)
Mehta Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 1:19 AM
Very clever thought penned well, James. congrats
Fraser Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 3:53 PM
Thank you Dr. Ram - I so enjoy your comments, James.
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 1:48 PM
- Bravo, great haiku James !! - Good luck in the contest! - Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Fraser Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 1:55 PM
Many thanks Anne Lise,your lovely comments are always a joy to read. Happy Weekend also, James :)
Onclaud Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 1:30 PM
wonderful take for a 'ku, prince... the interpretations here are endless... huggs
Fraser Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 1:33 PM
Thank you Princess, love your comments, and indeed, interpretations are worth the pondering, James (((( hugs )))) back, xx :)
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