Verses Kisses

Verses kisses 

How sweet is 
my Phenomenal kisses
to taste
to feel
as sweet as guimaras mangoes

from desirous red lips
to meet yearning

puddle with love
inundate heart
fallen repeatedly
like thundering rain

breezing 
gorgeous fresh air
to my soulmate 
my kimba

if you could only
taste
my verses kisses

let it embrace you
with love
with light

*dedicated to my dearest Kimba*

sukmawati komala
03 February 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/13/2013 10:41:00 AM
taking in one of your earlier poems, not disappointed,,, love this
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Date: 3/25/2013 12:09:00 PM
Dear Sukmawati, Another Jewel of YOUR POETRY. "Kimba" is very Lucky I am a retired Chef and in this Marvelous Write YOU have told me much about YOURSELF. I know YOUR Asian, not South American because of the mention of Guimaras Mangoes I would say Thailand or close to it. Superb Pen. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 3/25/2013 12:08:00 PM
Dear Sukmawati, Another Jewel of YOUR POETRY. "Kimba" is very Lucky I am a retired Chef and in this Marvelous Write YOU have told me much about YOURSELF. I know YOUR Asian, not South American because of the mention of Guimaras Mangoes I would say Thailand or close to it. Superb Pen. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 2/19/2013 11:42:00 PM
This is extremely poetical. Congrats ! Thanks for your comments on my little verse. Grateful, if you could comments on my other verses too. Regards Williamsji Maveli williamsji@yahoo.com www.williamsji.com
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Date: 2/19/2013 12:43:00 PM
Love it, Love it, love it ;} I also love mango's ;} you have a blessed day .
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Date: 2/13/2013 8:38:00 PM
He's a blessed man. Although, I don't care for mangos I like this poem.
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Date: 2/7/2013 6:34:00 PM
this is darling!! I love how you made the kisses be verses. WElcome back. Peopel were wondering where you sent, sweetie.
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Date: 2/7/2013 1:43:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your passionate work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 2/7/2013 12:28:00 PM
Kimba is one lucky guy!...Elegant tribute to your soulmate, Sukmawati - Tim (does anyone ever call you Suka?...I think it sounds beautiful)
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Date: 2/6/2013 11:00:00 PM
Your writes are so refreshing....Ahhhh :o)
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Date: 2/6/2013 8:06:00 PM
HI Sukmawati... wow..what happen to all your poems... about your poem: it is very lovely and cute.. love is embraces as we speak... enjoyed~LINDA
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Date: 2/6/2013 9:01:00 AM
Hi sweetie and thanks for your comment, where have all you poems gone, please tell me you are publishing and not leaving? love this one and Kimba is lucky xx
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Date: 2/5/2013 10:50:00 AM
Your kimba is lucky. Thanks for your comment on my write. Loved always, bl
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