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My mistake every word you make such as frosty shards smacked me hard. A truth I would never believe I had to turn around and leave This whole time I've been blind never reacting to what's behind. The truth is, I will never know when feelings overflow Your lies continue to deceive because it's acerb to believe. wanting for what I won't ever get Right now, I reckon it's truly set My chest is pounding with severe chest pain You left me and made me uneasy again. Nothing perishes ever since life exists wherever. Written: September 20, 2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 9/23/2022 2:37:00 PM

Let me explain further, what may appear to be a very insensitive comment to your poem. Again, in my humble opinion, from my own experience of the loss of what I thought to be Love. I was near suicidal after my first wife of nine years left me and what our friends at church and everyone we knew thought was a perfect marriage, without any explanation. It took a deep look into the difference between Love and preceived love for me to survive. my comment reflects thoughts from that experience. P.S. Soup mail

Sotto Poet
Date: 9/24/2022 7:08:00 AM

Thank you so much for the thoughtful comments that you have provided, dear friend, Bill. There is nothing in them that can be construed as negative. Our lives are fraught with difficulties, particularly when we consider matters of love and returned love as it is viewed. Thanks for expressing your opinions, offering my best regards.

Bill Baker

Date: 9/23/2022 2:12:00 PM

The greatest pain is in the lessons not learned from the mistakes we make when exploring the experiences of love, or our inadequate understand of the feeling, emotion, or experience. Love doesn't hurt, but the illusion of it can be excruciating, while the loss of it may be impossible. Most of our lost love experiences are most painful because we are imperfect and not as wise and understanding in matters of Love as we think. (in my humble opinion). Thanks for sharing, Bill

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/21/2022 12:26:00 PM

Hello Sotto, I say feel the pain for a short while. Then mourn no more. Let it go. Enjoy yur your day my friend.

Michael Tor

Date: 9/21/2022 6:50:00 AM

We must get through the adversity of painful love and continue on. /Thanks for sharing Lasaad...

Valsa George

Date: 9/21/2022 5:17:00 AM

Some people cut our heart as with a blade making it bleed ! Words hurt, but life has to go on. Powerfully presented!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/21/2022 5:07:00 AM

This poignant write illustrates love hurts--and yet, life goes on.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/20/2022 10:31:00 PM

Words can cut deeply leaving scars, one should think before opening their mouth and speak wisely. Tom

Sotto Poet
Date: 9/21/2022 3:02:00 AM

Absolutely right dear Tom, one should think before opening their mouth. Have a blessed day.

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/20/2022 10:25:00 PM

Wow, Powerful heartfelt poetry here i read, Lasaad.

Sotto Poet
Date: 9/21/2022 3:03:00 AM

I’m glad you like it, Harry. And thanks for your valuable feedback. Be blessed.