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Veronicas Story

I watched him when he was just a boy Looking wide eyed in the carpenters house As Joseph carved and crafted wood. Then years later, I heard him teaching On the shores of the lake in Gallilee Carving the souls of all who listened With teaching that came from such depths. He spoke with authority, wisdom and love Capturing all those present with his truth As he had captured so many fish hours earlier. But on that day I stood on a corner in Jerusalem. In the distance, the babble of a crowd Jeering , laughing and shouting, A cacophony of hate, approached. The hot afternoon sun’s draining heat Seemed only to fuel the mobs anger. As they came near, I saw a man Carrying a heavy, wooden cross. His head bent. body stooped Blood dripping from the thorny crown The soldiers had forced upon his head. I gasped to see this human frame As it collapsed upon the dusty street Unable to bear the terrible weight Of the heavy wooden beams And the sins of mankind. I ran to him, an urge to do something Overpowered any fear of the soldiers I placed a cloth over his blood stained face He looked at me with gentle eyes Now I could see his features I recognised him , he was Jesus. I folded away the cloth That bore the imprint of his face Etched in blood and sweat . In the depth of his pain and torment He looked at me with eyes full of love The impression they made on my soul Was so immense, so powerful That tears were flowing down my face. I backed away as the crowd moved on. Later I saw them take his fractured body From the blood stained cross. I watched as his mother held her son Before they took his body away. To the tomb that had been prepared. But would not prove to be His final resting place. For I knew, in that moment, when I looked Into the face of the son of God. He would rise again As he had said. Easter Poetry Contest Sponsor Regina McIntosh 7/4/22

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Date: 4/18/2022 11:52:00 PM
Mike, I like the personal feeling of you being there to experience His darkest hours while love still flowed from His heart. Very brilliantly written. Congratulations on your wonderful win. I hope your Easter was a happy one. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/12/2022 6:53:00 AM
Great narration. Congratulations!
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Mike Miller
Date: 4/13/2022 9:57:00 AM
Thank you Alex for your kind comments and I am pleased you enjoyed my poem. Happy Easter to you.
Date: 4/12/2022 12:14:00 AM
This is beautiful poignant write my dear Sam. I loved how you took yourself to the long journey of Jesus up to the time of His resurrection. To God be the Gloryt !Congratulations on your win with this superb write! Thanks a lot for sharing! I enjoyed. Happy Easter and God bless!
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Date: 4/13/2022 9:55:00 AM
Happy Easter to you too Len and thank you for your kind words. We must all walk the way of the cross so we have some hope of the resurrection.
Date: 4/11/2022 3:59:00 PM
Mike, I have always loved the story of Veronica and her simple gift of compassion in the midst of horror and hatred! She responded with what she had - a towel - in the moment she was offered. What a wonderful example to us - make a difference with what you have. Congratulations on your win. Happy Easter!
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Date: 4/13/2022 9:53:00 AM
Thank you Sam and Happy Easter to you too. I agree completely - Veronica teaches us all a valuable lesson that no matter how small the act of kindness or compassion in the face of terrible suffering, cruelty and pain, giving whatever you can to help someone in need or alleviate in some small part there distress is what makes us human and what God calls us to do. As the words of the hymn goes “ They’ll know we are Christian’s by our love”
Date: 4/11/2022 8:44:00 AM
Wow, very poignant poem! I love the way you constructed the poem, imposing yourself as if you had lived and walked where He walked; honoring him through his life and in his death ~ knowing he would rise again.Congratulations on your win in the contest. I really enjoyed this. Happy Easter, Paulette
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Date: 4/11/2022 2:07:00 PM
Happy Easter to you too Paulette. Thank you for your kind words. I have always found Veronicas act of kindness and selflessness inspiring. There are many parallels in todays world where people seek to alleviate the pain and suffering of others with no regard to their own safety. May God bless you this Easter and always . Mike
Date: 4/11/2022 6:46:00 AM
Just love this. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 4/11/2022 2:08:00 PM
Thank you Regina - I wish you all the blessings of Easter and am so pleased you enjoyed my poem.
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Date: 4/11/2022 2:01:00 PM
Thank you Regina - I wish you all the blessings of Easter and am so pleased you enjoyed my poem.

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