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Vermillion Sunrise At Kanyakumari

"A glance at the magical hues splashed into sky at dawn Paints a picture of hope in my mind's blank canvas" ~ quote by poet At the southernmost tip of The Peninsular India, where the three seas meet at the 'Triveni Sangamam', the blue waves hum in a surge of excitement, gurgling, tossing and tumbling, awaiting the most spectacular moment; Anticipating the arrival of her Prince of Charm, the somber sky yearns for his first touch at dawn; The mighty golden white ball ascends slowly with his steps steady and gentle - and sees his beloved - ravishing - and blushing in vermillion hues immersed in waves of euphoria as the rising sun's first ray kindles her gloomy spirit; with a special glow in her face hitherto not seen, the sky welcomes her beloved with a vermillion smile; Cherished by the warmth of the sun's magical glow, the dreamy sky displays hues of hope; In a rhythmic ballad, the waves of the three seas sing in chorus, their tale of love. Note: Triveni Sangamam - A beach at the southern tip of India in Kanyakumari, where one can witness the sangamam (meeting) of the three seas: The Bay of Bengal, The Arabian Sea, and The Indian Ocean. The sunrise at the Triveni Sangamam in Kanyakumari is a spectacular sight. Date: 11/18/2021 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 23 Poetry Contest "V" New or Old Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 7/30/2022 3:57:00 PM
Noticing this gem of yours again. Hope to write you tomorrow. Right now I just want to catch up on poetry comments!!!
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Date: 12/16/2021 9:27:00 AM
wow, this is glorious personification, my dear friend. A fave for me. I see you got first place. sorry no one congratulated you yet. Congrats and very well deserved placement
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Date: 11/29/2021 12:56:00 PM
Ani, congratulations on your First place win in my "V" New or Old Poems Contest, it is beautiful and wonderfully penned and your quote is great also ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/29/2021 11:43:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Constance for such an interesting contest. As always I enjoyed writing for your contest. Am so happy you liked my quote. Hugs...~ Ani
Date: 11/25/2021 4:06:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me witness the scene through your poetic talent. God bless you.
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Date: 11/23/2021 6:34:00 PM
Anitha, your description on the first stanza is fascinating. The whole verse is beautiful. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest. I hope you have a great Thanksgiving with family. Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/23/2021 7:20:00 AM
Your description and imagery are so so beautiful ani, no wonder this was a top winner, many congratulations on your win, hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/23/2021 6:18:00 AM
Revisiting Anitha - To My faves. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 11/23/2021 12:50:00 AM
Spectacular description of the dawn infusing vermillion hued delight in the three seas triangulation, congrats on your win, Anitha!
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Date: 11/22/2021 3:34:00 PM
Glad to see you win at the TOP of #1 Ani. BIG congrats on this lovely poem you wrote.
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Date: 11/22/2021 2:44:00 PM
CONGRATS on your win with this vividly descriptive piece, Anitha. Janice
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Date: 11/22/2021 8:40:00 AM
You have talked about my district so beautifully. Great writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/19/2021 2:54:00 PM
Dear Anitha, I haven't visited this place yet, but I am very familiar with the story of the waiting bride - 'Kanyakumari". I can imagine the enchanting vermillion sky at the meeting-place of the three seas. Love and best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 11/18/2021 8:24:00 PM
Ani, I have witnessed this breathtaking scene many a time. You could impart the whole beauty and grandeur of this spectacular scene through these lines . When the vermilion hue, as it tints the sky, the whole area turns into a magical venue! Lovely.... !
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Date: 11/18/2021 10:26:00 AM
Beautiful poem in every way, Ani. Enjoyed your description of the land where seas meet to witness the magic. Delightful flow to your free verse. Win BIG!
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Date: 11/18/2021 9:21:00 AM
This poem is pure magic. Great poetry. Hugs.
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Date: 11/18/2021 8:34:00 AM
It must be amazing to witness that scene Ani. Best of luck in the contest. Hope your week is going well. Tom
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