Vermilion Fall

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There is a palette, rare, that Autumn holds

               Brights shades of amber, sepias and golds



The forest canopies - once emerald green

               Now set ablaze with burnished tangerine



The foliage drifts, butterscotch and brown

               Soft pastel-hued confetti, spinning down



So crisp, the air and leaves of scarlet red

               As Mother Nature tucks the woods in bed



And when the months are waxing on to ten ...

               This bold vermillion dance ... will start again




October 16, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/14/2018 12:57:00 PM
The lush beauty of Autumn! Congrats, Gregory!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 8:35:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim! :-) <3
Date: 11/13/2018 3:12:00 AM
an autumnal gem Greg! Many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/13/2018 7:59:00 AM
That's very sweet of you, Jan, thank you so much, Dear Poet! :-) <3
Date: 11/12/2018 11:10:00 PM
Greg, congratulations on your win. The world is a canvas of beautiful color.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/13/2018 7:59:00 AM
You are so right, Eve - and thank you very much for the kind words! :-) <3
Date: 11/12/2018 4:46:00 PM
Congratulations for your win : )
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/13/2018 7:58:00 AM
Thank you so much, Heidi! :-) <3
Date: 11/12/2018 4:12:00 PM
Lovely, Gregory. Congrats on your well deserved top win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/13/2018 7:57:00 AM
Thank you very much, Line! :-) <3
Date: 11/12/2018 3:21:00 PM
I'm so pleased that your beautiful poem was 'recognised' Greg. I enjoyed it as much second time around!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/13/2018 7:57:00 AM
That's very kind of you, Wendy, thank you so much, Dear Poet! :-) <3
Date: 11/12/2018 2:27:00 PM
Nicely well written, fellow poet! You have done well on your 5th place win in my contest! -VS
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/13/2018 7:56:00 AM
Thank you so much, VS, I am honored to be on a list with such great writers, and pleased that you found my poem worthy of placement ... blessings, my friend!
Date: 10/21/2018 8:45:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats on a top win, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/23/2018 1:10:00 AM
Thank you very much, Line! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 10/21/2018 6:08:00 PM
Hi Greg: I went to respond to a comment you had left on my poem , Eyes of Mother Nature’, and it was gone. Thanks for commenting and I don’t understand why your comment disappeared. ??? Best, SuZ
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/23/2018 1:09:00 AM
Part of yesterday's "glitch", sadly, I lost comments, too, and almost lost a poem. I hope your damage was minimal! :-) <3
Date: 10/20/2018 4:27:00 PM
Beautifully descriptive of this my favorite time of year. Congratulations on another fine win. Always a pleasure to read your words. Best, SuZ
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/23/2018 1:08:00 AM
You are very sweet, Suzanne, and I thank you so much - I'm pleased you enjoyed my poem, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 10/20/2018 3:24:00 PM
The glory of autumn shines in this exquisite piece Greg. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Haven't heard from you in a long time. I hope you are well. Blessings Connie : )
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/23/2018 1:07:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Connie - I have been swamped - my brother had bowel surgery so I've had to take care of the folks by myself for the last two weeks, and then last week I got bronchitis and strep, so I'm now on antibiotics and other meds, hoping to improve soon. The responsibilities don't go away when illness comes, though, so I keep plugging. Blessings, Dear Friend - I hope you're well! :-) <3
Date: 10/19/2018 9:11:00 AM
Greg, this is so beautifully penned, a winner for sure, you are a wonderful writer ~
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/19/2018 2:15:00 PM
You are so very kind, Constance, and I so greatly appreciate your kind words. Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 10/16/2018 5:52:00 AM
Beautiful, Gregory. Superb penning.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/19/2018 2:14:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Line! :-) <3
Date: 10/16/2018 2:36:00 AM
I'm running out of superlatives to describe my response to your poetry,Greg! These couplets are as magnificent as the autumnal scene you depict. So many original touches! Thank you for sharing this wonderful gift with us! Wendy
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/19/2018 2:14:00 PM
This is such a sweet, wonderful comment, Wendy, and I want you to know that it means a great deal to me, as I can tell you are sincere. Thanks and blessings to you, my friend, you are as nice a person as you are an accomplished poet! :-) <3
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