Verdenesurld

Pure emotion, I derive
from the fruits of whatever I find inside
So you may take my hand 
and I may take you to a new world
Called Verdenesurld 

A sanctuary, so pure 
the water hasn't fallen
So fertile, the flowers haven't grown
Forever warmth within its grounds
The Kind still yet unknown.

Shall we descend the copper staircase?
Enter the crystal void
open the Jewel encrusted
Chamber
and transcend our lives into joy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 10:35 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's Anything Goes Contest One Michael. Love,Carol
George   Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 12:21 AM
Beautiful verse, Michael. Congratulations on your win and thank you for shariang your poetic talent. Lainie
Culverhouse Avatar
November 28, 2009 at 1:34 PM
I am not sure what Verdenesurld is, but neat poem.
La France Avatar
November 26, 2009 at 2:27 PM
Hi Michael, my contest can be found under contests, at the top, it is called Anything Goes, it is already started and will continue until Jan 1, so write your poem then go back to the contest page and submit it. Hope to be reading it soon.
La France Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 12:40 PM
Hi Michael, thank you so much for commenting on my haiku. I really struggle with that form(and I even have changed it since you commented). I really like this poem of yours, a lovely place your words describe. May I suggest the form lyric vs I don't know or perhaps free verse. I am sponsoring a contest called Anything Goes, perhaps you are interested in submitting a poem?
Chircop Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 11:00 PM
How beautiful Jared to read these sweet words-Charma
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