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white dream in verdant green bridal veil in great assail rising from rainforest steam as speckled owl wail white steam in rocky stream a train of roaring lace penetrates the verdant scene falling, falling with such grace wet, cold moss beneath heat belonging to a black earth pull it up and you have peat smell the richly verdant worth ferns lean in verdant green while humidity socks nature’s own sauna scene among the turgid hot rocks slimy stones and slithery throng gather by the water’s flow the macaw adds its hooping song to the lush green world below 9/11/19 STRAND no 650 any theme any form Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 9/26/2019 5:03:00 PM
Janis congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write!
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Date: 9/26/2019 2:40:00 PM
I really enjoyed your use of verdant throughout the poem...great harmony. Congrats on your podium win Janis.
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Date: 9/26/2019 8:03:00 AM
- A truly amazing picture Eve chose :) - Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem in the contest, Janis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/26/2019 12:46:00 AM
A heavenly scene you have painted with your tantalizing words Janis. I love it! Congratulations on your deserving Second Placement! : ) xxoo
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Date: 9/25/2019 10:47:00 PM
Great poem, Janis, congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/12/2019 1:45:00 AM
Hello Janis … a lovely verse you have written on rainforest beauty Janis. Thank you Janis - Lindsay
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Date: 9/12/2019 12:16:00 PM
I see you like the rainforest birds too. Very colorful. Thanks for the comments.

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