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What’s to be? You and me, brought together by goddess of fate, Verdandi.. Reverie ...our first night; your voice caressed me in a rose petal red cascade, nuances of your soul as intoxicating as eau de vie brandy as you sensuously swept me through the sultry sway of your serenade… ...so many years since, so many nights now estranged, so many ‘firsts’ forgotten, was this part of Verdandi’s plan that our love is meant to be misbegotten? What happened to your belief of our paths' merged by Divine intervention? Was it ever in your heart or just your imaginary romantic invention... Undress me and redress me! Atone my aroused body, heart and mind! I’ll taste you, toast you, savor your wanton wine, inhale and breathe you in; deliver me your ecstasies erotic to realms exotic I’d never find, fill me, thrill me, strum my strings till I sing; stroke me I’m your violin. Let me temptingly tease your rising tide and I’ll ride your wild waves higher, embrace me, love me and together let’s revel in rolling rhythmic swells; take me in your arms, pin me with your carnal charms and aching desire, rock me, quake me shock me, shake me, I’m your lily-belle mademoiselle From Heaven to Hell and back again, take me, spin my world counter-clockwise. Remember ...when your fervor first whirlwind-twirled me in a ravishment of ‘I love you’... Satiate me, with a lust that grows and shows aglow in your elsewhere eyes, rekindle us; it’s not too late, evaporate the cooling dew on heartstrings blue. Susan Ashley October 2, 2017 ~ Second Place ~ Love For Movie Screens Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 1/14/2019 3:03:00 PM
Hi Susan, this is such an amazing write. You have served up a smorgasbord of wondrous scenes that stir the passionate heart. Your canvas is painted with such wondrously vivid images. This is the write to stir the passionate core. I think I shall head for the cold shower now Susan. A sensual dream. A fave. have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Susan Ashley
Date: 1/22/2019 8:11:00 PM
My dear friend, please forgive my delay in responding to your precious comments, I’m still spending more time with my Dad due to his health issues. I’m so pleased you enjoyed my poem, which was part of my ‘Wild Mango Fandango’ phase :)) Your warm words fill me with delight as does your wonderful visit and fave, Mike. Thank you for generous kindness, my inspiring friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 3/22/2018 5:05:00 PM
A sensual masterpiece, Susan! My compliments!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/22/2018 5:26:00 PM
It's so wonderful to see you, Ralph! Thank you for spending time with my poem, I relish your comments and delight in your visit, my friend. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
Date: 11/23/2017 4:08:00 PM
This surely will be a box office hit, Susan:) It possesses all the ingredients that can tease imagination and fantasy...sensual, erotic, hot and passionate. A very deserved win...congratulations. Warm regards // paul
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Date: 11/23/2017 7:40:00 PM
Thank you for your awesome comment Paul! I am thrilled that you enjoyed this poem. I do love writing about 'love' in all its many emotional moods, shades and colors. This was written while I was still in my 'Wild Mango Fandango' phase... lol! Your lovely critique of my poem has inspired a smile.. Warmest wishes ~Susan
Date: 10/5/2017 8:59:00 PM
Whew! Great passion Susan, congratulations...
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Date: 10/5/2017 9:12:00 PM
It's with much appreciation Charlie that I read your kind words and warm congrats. Thank you!
Date: 10/5/2017 6:59:00 PM
Such a passionate, well-written poem, Susan! A perfect, theme for a very moving love story. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
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Date: 10/5/2017 7:05:00 PM
Thank you Sandra for your lovely sentiments. I so appreciate your visit and your kind, heartwarming comment and offer of congrats! :) Susan
Date: 10/5/2017 9:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your nice win, Susan ...
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/5/2017 4:58:00 PM
Probir, thank you for your kind visit. I appreciate your lovely words of congrats! Susan
Date: 10/5/2017 7:39:00 AM
Wonderfully enchanting and whimsical write, Susan, I enjoyed this very much! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - great stuff! :-)
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Date: 10/5/2017 4:54:00 PM
Your lovely sentiments and warm congrats are so appreciated Gregory. Thank you for your visit and your heartwarming comment. I'm so happy you enjoyed! Hugs and friendship :) Susan
Date: 10/4/2017 10:13:00 PM
Susan, congratulations on your winning entry. All the best, Sonia.
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Date: 10/5/2017 6:02:00 AM
Much appreciation Sonia for your warm congrats and visit! Susan
Date: 10/4/2017 8:46:00 PM
Wonderful write with many rhythms that seem to move you through the poem. Very passionate write, Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/5/2017 4:43:00 PM
HI Janis, thank you very much for your visit and lovely sentiments. I so appreciate your wonderful comment and kind congrats! :) Susan
Date: 10/4/2017 2:55:00 PM
This is a spectacular poem, second read even better, congrats on a great win, I KNEW IT!
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Date: 10/4/2017 9:05:00 PM
Yes, you called it my friend! :) Thank you John for all your wonderful support and encouragement through your lovely comments and visits. Your heart-warming words of congrats are cherished. :) Susan
Date: 10/4/2017 1:44:00 PM
I am completely in awe of this seductive write CONGRATULATIONS,Susan!
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Date: 10/5/2017 4:41:00 PM
Ralph, it is with such appreciation that I read your lovely sentiments. Thank you for your kind and heart-warming comment and congrats. I was in complete awe when I read YOUR poem. It's a totally amazing write my friend! :)
Date: 10/4/2017 1:14:00 PM
Susan, seductive and lovely, congratulations on your win !
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Date: 10/5/2017 4:28:00 PM
I treasure your lovely sentiments Broken Wings. Thank you! Susan
Date: 10/4/2017 12:38:00 PM
Back to Congratulate you!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/5/2017 4:27:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve! Susan
Date: 10/4/2017 9:37:00 AM
Congrats on your win Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/4/2017 9:52:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 10/4/2017 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Susan, I have read this three times and every time I wanted to keep on reading, absolutely brilliant. :))
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Date: 10/4/2017 9:51:00 PM
Roy, I'm so thrilled that you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for your lovely words, warm congrats and kind visit. With much appreciation I thank you! :) Susan
Date: 10/4/2017 8:54:00 AM
wow, this is breathtaking in its every detail... Very nice, Susan, and I see congrats are in order! I'm not surprised ;) congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/4/2017 9:27:00 PM
Becca, I so appreciate your lovely and kind comment and visit. Thank you for taking the time to read my poetry. I'm so happy you enjoyed! :) Susan
Date: 10/4/2017 7:14:00 AM
Congrats Susan on your well deserved win!
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Date: 10/4/2017 7:34:00 PM
Much appreciation Vijay for your wonderful words of congrats! Susan
Date: 10/4/2017 6:35:00 AM
An excellent story line of lovers, sensual, and it has great flow to it.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/4/2017 7:30:00 PM
Thank you Silent One for the wonderful placement of my poem in your contest. I truly appreciate your kind words of praise and enjoyed participating in this event. Also, thank you for sponsoring a contest with such an interesting theme to muse about! Susan
Date: 10/4/2017 6:33:00 AM
An awesome write Susan, I can see it doing really well in the contest. Good luck...Maria xxx
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Date: 10/4/2017 9:25:00 PM
Maria, it's always such a pleasure for me when i receive a lovely and heartfelt comment and visit from you. Thank you for your kind words and for taking the time to read my poetry. Hugs and friendship! :) Susan
Date: 10/4/2017 4:06:00 AM
Wow! A sensual masterpiece, Susan! The whole poem is filled with beautifully crafted imagery but the last 3 stanzas are downright aphrodisiac! Can I rent your poem if I ever need to woo a girl? Just kiddin' :)))
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/4/2017 8:42:00 PM
I so appreciate your positive and encouraging comments Bernard bc sometimes I'm not always sure if it's good enough... you know what I mean? You're lovely feedback always helps to chase the doubts away. Thank you friend! :) Susan
Date: 10/3/2017 8:53:00 PM
Whew, this poem is hot enough to give anyone the vapors! Very sensual! Good luck in the contest Susan; I'm sure this is a winner too!~Che :)
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Date: 10/4/2017 8:33:00 PM
Thank you so much Cheryl for your enthusiastic comment and visit. I enjoyed the use of the word 'vapors' :) in your lovely message and I so appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my poem. :) Susan
Date: 10/3/2017 8:07:00 PM
written with such enthusiasm and excitement. strong romance going on. love it! Best to you in the contest.. hugs
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Date: 10/3/2017 8:20:00 PM
Thank you so much Margaret for your lovely comment and visit. Your wonderful words of encouragement are greatly appreciated. I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem! :) Susan
Date: 10/3/2017 2:29:00 PM
A lovely write Susan....GL in the contest
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Date: 10/3/2017 3:34:00 PM
I appreciate your visit and your kind comment Joseph. Thank you! :) Susan
Date: 10/3/2017 4:43:00 AM
Fantastic Susan ... Moonlight of poetry ... Fascinating write ... Having read two times I was thinking if I would withdraw my write and rewrite a poem ... hahaha ... Great ... Sure podium win ...
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/3/2017 6:00:00 AM
Hi Probir, thank you for your kind and enthusiastic comment and visit. I wrote this as an impassioned plea of a woman fighting to save her long-term relationship after realizing that her significant other has strayed.., hence the words 'elsewhere eyes' and the last line in the poem... I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem! Susan
Date: 10/2/2017 9:13:00 PM
Very well done,Susan, luck in the contest hugs Eve
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/3/2017 7:45:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve for your lovely comment and visit :) Susan
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