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simply blither simply obscure obscure lingo obscure form form of creation form the phrase phrase the question phrase for the play play on your knees play in the yards yards of meter yards of counted counted on your fingers counted on your toes toes of glory toes which dance dance in lines dance in time time to form questions time to answer answer the phone answer the call call OUT call them IN in deed in need need to have structure need to find place place on the page place on the stage stage play stage coach coach the team coach ride ride the car ride the boss boss the writer boss the poet poet with style poet who lingers lingers on their own pain lingers on their own voice voice uncontrolled voice over stated stated a need stated verbose verbose Narcissists verbose polemic polemics Narcissists

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Date: 10/7/2018 9:27:00 PM
Nicely done, Debbie, still a very confusing form for me :)
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Date: 10/11/2015 7:32:00 PM
I see myself in this quandry often....good one, Deb!
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Date: 10/11/2015 7:18:00 PM
I think these are difficult but you did a great job in rolling from one line to the next smoothly. I will have to try one.
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Date: 10/11/2015 6:40:00 PM
Dear Debbie Guzzi Interesting poem as usual, yours is also very charming for this Sunday night, Cheryl Dunn and thanks for your comment today.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/11/2015 6:49:00 PM
smooch!
Date: 10/11/2015 5:23:00 PM
Debbie, this is the first Blitz I have read. A fantabulous job I must say. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 10/11/2015 3:45:00 PM
To one of my oldest friends on the soup. I know I haven't been around lately, sorry. I haven't had much to write lately. But I can comment on this piece; the title fits.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/11/2015 5:05:00 PM
aaaaahhh now who are you? I'm still just me!
Date: 10/7/2015 3:23:00 PM
Love these blitz poems from you Deb!! One can feel a bit of the rebel in this one! :) lol !!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/7/2015 4:30:00 PM
yup that's me REBEL WITH A CAUSE!!! Hey Carrie there's a call out for a sonnet anthology why not try with me & Dee?
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Carrie Richards
Date: 10/7/2015 3:25:00 PM
And ps.........thanks so much for the placement in the contest....I am always happy to be on any of your winner's lists......."period" !!
Date: 10/7/2015 9:08:00 AM
Oh, and what state are you from?
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/7/2015 10:30:00 AM
CT James!
Date: 10/7/2015 9:05:00 AM
DG, I am no fool and think your poem is pretty cool. Jim Horn
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Date: 10/7/2015 6:01:00 AM
Interesting vocabulary in this one..I would say that someone needed chewing out..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara
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Date: 10/1/2015 9:42:00 PM
sounds like you're castigating some poet, Deb? hugs!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/1/2015 9:52:00 PM
nawwww Kim - I just took it where it went & mostly I was thinking of the campaign in the USA
Date: 9/25/2015 12:22:00 PM
Never have tried the Blitz form myself and will try it soon. Thanks for visiting my poem and Congratulations on your new book. love phyl
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Date: 9/24/2015 8:08:00 AM
A very wonderful poem my dear friend, Deb. Adoring your words and write as well. You did this form extra-ordinarily well. I'm so glad to read it. Hope I can also try blitz poem someday. Thank you so much for sharing and for visiting one of my poems. love lots and biggest hug, Leonora
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Date: 9/22/2015 6:31:00 PM
What a clever write and a great effort. The ending is great.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 9/22/2015 7:15:00 PM
Thanks Michael!
Date: 9/22/2015 8:13:00 AM
At the beginning it felt like you were describing our Prime Ministerial candidates. I enjoyed your blitz.
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Date: 9/22/2015 5:27:00 AM
An avalanche of captivating writing, dear Debbie!
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