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Verbous and Obscure

simply blither
simply obscure
obscure lingo
obscure form
form of creation
form the phrase
phrase the question
phrase for the play
play on your knees
play in the yards
yards of meter
yards of counted
counted on your fingers
counted on your toes
toes of glory
toes which dance
dance in lines
dance in time
time to form questions
time to answer
answer the phone
answer the call
call OUT
call them IN
in deed
in need
need to have structure
need to find place
place on the page
place on the stage
stage play
stage coach
coach the team
coach ride
ride the car
ride the boss
boss the writer
boss the poet
poet with style
poet who lingers
lingers on their own pain
lingers on their own voice
voice uncontrolled
voice over stated
stated a need
stated verbose
verbose Narcissists
verbose polemic
polemics
Narcissists
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Date: 10/7/2018 9:27:00 PM
Nicely done, Debbie, still a very confusing form for me :)
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Date: 10/11/2015 7:32:00 PM
I see myself in this quandry often....good one, Deb!
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Date: 10/11/2015 7:18:00 PM
I think these are difficult but you did a great job in rolling from one line to the next smoothly. I will have to try one.
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Date: 10/11/2015 6:40:00 PM
Dear Debbie Guzzi Interesting poem as usual, yours is also very charming for this Sunday night, Cheryl Dunn and thanks for your comment today.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/11/2015 6:49:00 PM
smooch!
Date: 10/11/2015 5:23:00 PM
Debbie, this is the first Blitz I have read. A fantabulous job I must say. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 10/11/2015 3:45:00 PM
To one of my oldest friends on the soup. I know I haven't been around lately, sorry. I haven't had much to write lately. But I can comment on this piece; the title fits.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/11/2015 5:05:00 PM
aaaaahhh now who are you? I'm still just me!
Date: 10/7/2015 3:23:00 PM
Love these blitz poems from you Deb!! One can feel a bit of the rebel in this one! :) lol !!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/7/2015 4:30:00 PM
yup that's me REBEL WITH A CAUSE!!! Hey Carrie there's a call out for a sonnet anthology why not try with me & Dee?
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Carrie Richards
Date: 10/7/2015 3:25:00 PM
And ps.........thanks so much for the placement in the contest....I am always happy to be on any of your winner's lists......."period" !!
Date: 10/7/2015 9:08:00 AM
Oh, and what state are you from?
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/7/2015 10:30:00 AM
CT James!
Date: 10/7/2015 9:05:00 AM
DG, I am no fool and think your poem is pretty cool. Jim Horn
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Date: 10/7/2015 6:01:00 AM
Interesting vocabulary in this one..I would say that someone needed chewing out..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara
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Date: 10/1/2015 9:42:00 PM
sounds like you're castigating some poet, Deb? hugs!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/1/2015 9:52:00 PM
nawwww Kim - I just took it where it went & mostly I was thinking of the campaign in the USA
Date: 9/25/2015 12:22:00 PM
Never have tried the Blitz form myself and will try it soon. Thanks for visiting my poem and Congratulations on your new book. love phyl
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Date: 9/24/2015 8:08:00 AM
A very wonderful poem my dear friend, Deb. Adoring your words and write as well. You did this form extra-ordinarily well. I'm so glad to read it. Hope I can also try blitz poem someday. Thank you so much for sharing and for visiting one of my poems. love lots and biggest hug, Leonora
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Date: 9/22/2015 6:31:00 PM
What a clever write and a great effort. The ending is great.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 9/22/2015 7:15:00 PM
Thanks Michael!
Date: 9/22/2015 8:13:00 AM
At the beginning it felt like you were describing our Prime Ministerial candidates. I enjoyed your blitz.
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Date: 9/22/2015 5:27:00 AM
An avalanche of captivating writing, dear Debbie!
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