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Venus Not Mars

Men have logic and physical strength, Judging objects by their width and length. Yet lose despite strong ammunition, To women's innate intuition. November 28, 2019

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Date: 11/23/2020 6:41:00 PM
Oh, being a woman, I know this to be true, Margarita. I love the alliteration of "innate intuition" - it is poetic and it pays homage to an inspirational gift and a survival mechanism. I admire your rhymes (ammunition/intuition.. ingenious!) and your expression of contrasting ideas. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/24/2020 12:17:00 PM
Oh thank you, Susan! Supposed to be solely humorous, ended up being very gender philosophical... Never know! :) Margarita
Date: 11/19/2020 9:55:00 PM
Nice musings on the sexes and their unique strengths, Margarita. I often have wished I were better in the intuition department. Congrats on your win ~ John
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Date: 11/23/2020 11:06:00 AM
Let us admire your strengths! Tried to comment on your Four Seasons in Your Soul, but it didn't let me. So here I will: Always admire laconic and vivid. Warm Welcome to Canada on such cool note. M.
Date: 11/19/2020 4:32:00 PM
very nice!! Congrats on the win.
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Date: 11/23/2020 11:06:00 AM
Thx
Date: 11/19/2020 6:26:00 AM
Hi Margaret, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/23/2020 11:07:00 AM
Thx
Date: 11/19/2020 5:59:00 AM
Intuition always win over logic...well said! Congratulations on your well-deserved win.
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Date: 11/23/2020 11:07:00 AM
thx
Date: 12/13/2019 1:13:00 PM
So clever, Margarita!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 12/13/2019 9:18:00 PM
Thanks:)
Date: 12/11/2019 4:19:00 PM
They are not the only one who judge that way, are they Margarita? Well done.
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Date: 12/13/2019 9:19:00 PM
Misjudge, I say :)
Date: 12/11/2019 4:04:00 AM
Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 12/13/2019 9:19:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 12/11/2019 12:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Margarita. So very true.
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Date: 12/13/2019 9:19:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 12/10/2019 11:48:00 PM
Good one, Margarita. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/10/2019 9:23:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Margarita
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Date: 12/13/2019 9:19:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 12/1/2019 2:12:00 PM
My logic tells me Mars is a good place to be, but then I'm a man... Very cleverly penned, Margarita. John
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Date: 12/13/2019 9:20:00 PM
We are in the right places:)
Date: 11/29/2019 5:49:00 PM
I give up, you win, or am I giving in to easily? :) I think you explained it very well. Take care, Richard
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Date: 12/13/2019 9:21:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 11/29/2019 11:01:00 AM
Venus will be burnt if she comes closer to the sun. Men are safe , enjoying a cold position on Mars.
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 11/29/2019 3:19:00 PM
Men are safer indeed :)
Date: 11/28/2019 5:47:00 PM
Hallmark this to Trump! Aloha! Rico
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 11/28/2019 7:26:00 PM
Trump would brush it off like a subpoena :) Aloha!
Date: 11/28/2019 4:57:00 PM
lol loved it. Its not the size its the ego that gets carried to where its too heavy lol. Thanks for sharing this. Happy Thanksgiving
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 11/28/2019 7:27:00 PM
My pleasure ?? We had ours in October in Canada. Happy Thanksgivings!
Date: 11/28/2019 1:38:00 PM
- "their width and length" ... some has the need to boast themselves ... in an excessive way :))) - Fun and well written, Margarita :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/28/2019 3:38:00 PM
I’m glad you agree ??????