Sotto Poet Poet Sonnet

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Venus Dreamer

Collaboration, Constance La France First Sonnet, and, second Sonnet Sotto Poet

Dreamer, can you feel my kiss on your cheek,
the flutter of my hands upon your hair;
my sweet aura is one of great mystique,
the fragrance of flowers drift in the air.

Dreamer, you called upon Cupid for love,
to bring desire, passion and bliss divine;
but I am of dreams and from high above,
oh dreamer, lets stargaze laying supine.

The gold moon shining on us is fleeting,
for already the birds stir in the trees;
soon dreamer, the dawn-  we will be greeting,
my love, I must leave you on the morn's breeze.

And you will awake dreamer-  with charm;
soon, a lady will be holding your arm.

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Oh Cupid, luscious whiff of magic love,
when "love" comes it is a blissful feeling;
I lay in bed gazing at stars above,
Cupid, spread your wings and bring my darling.

Oh Cupid, rejoice with a flourish blow,
our love grows more intense and more divine;
sexy seductress Venus you should know,
you are sublime-  like a fresh spring design.

Oh Cupid, find your petals to throw down,
from candles lit-  a whiff wafts in the breeze;
and skies open . . . flowers make a love crown,
for seeing my Venus fills me with ease.

Shall we share this sweet enduring impact;
for to your love-  I will always react

Written: October 15, 2022

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Bill Baker October 19, 2022 at 9:47 AM A lovely collaboration. Back to back love sonnets. Well written, you've blended well the romantic emotions of love. A FAv for me, congratulations to you both on poetry well written, my friends. Bill

Constance La France October 16, 2022 at 2:02 PM Sotto, I am very proud of the poem we created together, thank you so much for writing with me, and I love the image and music you added, blessings Constance Sotto Poet October 16, 2022 at 4:34 PM Ditto, Constance, It gives me a great sense of accomplishment to work alongside you on the creation of such a fascinating sonnet. And I really hope that we could do things like this on a more regular basis.

Jeff Kyser October 16, 2022 at 1:35 PM Quite the collaboration! I think the POTD is about to get log-jammed! Have read some really nice works today!

David Kavanagh October 16, 2022 at 12:03 PM A dreamlike/fantasy collaboration Lasaad and Constance, each sonnet complimenting the other with a pining ethereal ambience throughout, excellent work by both poets, cheers David Sotto Poet October 16, 2022 at 12:10 PM Thank you so much, my friend, David. Your kind words are very encouraging and deeply appreciated.

Demetrios Trifiatis October 16, 2022 at 10:01 AM A divine collaboration inspired by Cupid that has produced a poetic symphony, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Congratulations to both of you! A FAVE for me. Blessings. Sotto Poet October 16, 2022 at 10:08 AM Thank you so much dear friend, Demetrios. Your kind words are so uplifting and thanks for the Fave