Venus and Mars

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Sworn together by my troth my May bride
  when joined were glad hearts on eternal date -
Rome did not fall nor the planets collide
  and blessed by the Fates we did celebrate.
You wore pearls, rings of emerald and gold,
  and girl, you and I an earthly child bore -
O’ Venus, heed my words that I have scrolled
  for we were once the gods of Love and War.
No artful other, no fool’s inaction
  will keep me apart or sworn vows undo,
and without further lapse or infraction
  I rededicate my life unto you.
Keep me close and drawn to your mortal charms
and in the rescue of your loving arms.


              Written: August 2004

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 2/28/2025 11:15:00 AM
21 years and the aging is like a fine wine. Poets grow; poetry changes; art remains. =;o]
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 2/28/2025 10:10:00 PM
Poetry and wine are natural bedfellows. They both have to be read, or white, whichever you prefer.
Date: 2/27/2025 5:54:00 AM
Awww what a beautiful tender sonnet. I like this side of you
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 2/27/2025 11:17:00 PM
Sunblocker and trendsetter, all in one.
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/27/2025 6:56:00 PM
I'll bet you wrote this one with your sunglasses off
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 2/27/2025 6:23:00 PM
What about all my other sides? I’m a polygon you know.
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