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Venus

I met Venus in Brockwell Park,
the air was calm, sweet as prophecy.
A book lay in my hand—
The Hammer of Witches.

She passed, her voice a soft enchantment:
“That book looks interesting—what is its name?”
I placed it in her hands.
Her eyes lingered. Intriguing…

We sat beneath the English Oak.
She asked if I believed in witchcraft.
I smiled—I read mysteries,
because reality hides there.
Her lips curved—then maybe I am a witch too.
We both laughed, shadows dancing.

Then her voice lowered:
If I tell you who I am,
perhaps you will run.
She whispered—I am Venus.
Born of Uranus, from Saturn’s blade.

Her words carved the air with sorrow.
Yet when I met her gaze,
our souls remembered.
I told her, I am Apollo,
the god of light and music.

Silence deepened—
our eyes locked, and worlds collapsed.
No flesh, only mind,
a burning union of ancient fire.

We flew through the sky of the soul,
witch and god entwined.
And when the vision ended,
only one truth remained:

When you see Venus,
you will see Apollo—
for in the end, we are one flame,
forever burning in exile.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 8/21/2025 4:54:00 PM
Beautiful vision of Cosmic life, Chanda ~ I enjoyed how you brought ‘as above, so below’ together. A lovely metaphor of how planets are born. B blessed for your insights. x.
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Chanda Katonga
Date: 8/21/2025 7:19:00 PM
“Thank you so much for your kind words, Your reflection means a lot. Indeed, the heavens mirror the soul, and I’m glad you felt that connection through my poem. Blessings and light to you always

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