Venus

Sweet as honey
Smooth as wine
Venus your name.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/11/2024 4:08:00 PM

Hello Hugo, congratulations on your POTD enjoy yur special day. my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/12/2024 9:52:00 AM

Hello Hugo, you are very welcome. Getting a POTD makes a day special. Your welcome always. my friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene/

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 8/12/2024 8:28:00 AM

Hi, Darlene, thank you for the comment. I'm honored and it's my pleasure to be on POTD. Thank you, Darlene. Always.../Hugo

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/11/2024 4:02:00 PM

This is beautiful, romantic and dreamy, all at the same time. :) ' Venus ' is her name. I can relate. Your thoughts bring a smile. Congratulations Hugo, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 8/12/2024 8:30:00 AM

Thank you, Brandy for your comment. Thank you for your nice message. I'm honored to be on POTD corner. Keep safe.../Hugo

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/11/2024 11:10:00 AM

I wish I was more like Venus, Hugo. My heart falls too easily, she is smooth as wine. Congratulations on your POTD Hugo Sarvida Jr.! Salamat for sharing. Enjoy your day! ~Anaya

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 8/12/2024 8:32:00 AM

Thank you, Anaya. How sweet you are. How I wish you are Venus. Anyway, Anaya is a nice, smooth as butter, name...

Ink Empress

Date: 8/11/2024 8:59:00 AM

Beautiful! So well described in few words, one that is fine and sweet! Pleasure reading this, congratulations on POTD

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 8/11/2024 9:05:00 AM

I'm impressed, Ink. Thank you for appreciating this very short poem. I'm deeply honored, Thank you for the comment.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/11/2024 7:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed your fun "Venus" write. Have a blessed day writing away...................

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 8/11/2024 8:30:00 AM

Thank you, Paula. I appreciate your comment. This is my first luck, hope more are coming in the future.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/11/2024 6:44:00 AM

I like this smooth, sweet poem. Congratulations on POTD.

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 8/11/2024 8:33:00 AM

Thank you, Hilda. I think you're one of the Venus type women. I'm just kidding. Anyway, thanks for the comment.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 8/11/2024 4:45:00 AM

Hello Hugo, Congrats on you getting POTD. - Blessings, my Friend, Daniel

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 8/11/2024 8:34:00 AM

Thank you, Daniel. Well, at least luck is on my side for just a day.

Paul Bell

Date: 8/11/2024 3:35:00 AM

Venus rocks.

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 8/11/2024 8:35:00 AM

Thank you, Paul.

Tom Woody

Date: 8/11/2024 3:26:00 AM

Sounds like quite a gal. Enjoy your day

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 8/11/2024 8:36:00 AM

Absolutely right, Tom. Thank you, my friend.

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 8/11/2024 3:04:00 AM

Dear Hugo, Congratulations on the honor of POTD. This is the first time I have ever heard of Than-Bauk form and will have to check it now. Blessings to you..

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 8/11/2024 8:44:00 AM

Thank you for the comment, Nancy. It's my honor to be on the POTD. It's my first one. Than-Bauk is a Burmese poetry composed of 3 lines with 4 syllables in every lines. Keep safe to you and your family...

Karen Jones

Date: 8/11/2024 1:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your potd honor!

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 8/11/2024 8:45:00 AM

Thank you, Karen. I appreciate it, thanks you.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/9/2024 10:42:00 AM

Hello Hugo, I enjoyed this poem. Venus is such a lovely name. It sounds peaceful. This poem will be my fav. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/11/2024 9:28:00 AM

Hello Hugo, Thank you for telling me. So there is summer there all the time? Or do you have the 4 seasons? Winter, Autumn, Spring and Summer. Thank you my friend. /Darlene/

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 8/11/2024 8:48:00 AM

Hi, Darlene, I'm a Filipino. I held in a small city not far from the capital city, Manila. I'm from Dasmarinas City, Cavite, Philippines.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/10/2024 10:43:00 AM

Hello Hugo, I love your comment. Where do you live? I have been wondering. Are you enjoying your summer? Enjoy your weekend. /Darlene/

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 8/10/2024 8:53:00 AM

Thank you, Darlene for appreciating this poem. There are two types of women. The Menierva type and Venus type. The Menierva type are women who uses the heart to choice love while Venus type are the mind type. Venus type are the practical one while Minierva type are the emotional one. They are both pretty godesses.

Venus

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