Venus

Is this real
Am I the first?.....
O Please let me in!
Your sadness is my curse,
Your love Is my remedy
O My nurse, my angel, my savior 
I'm your dark knight......
You my morning star!
The pyramid I have to climb,
The light I have to see
You my guidance,
Your love directs me to the right path 
You my destiny 
lets not deny the fact!

The opening of my heart
O yes! you opened the doors,
The keys of loyalty, 
The veil........
I'm the lad and you my lady, 
Man we meant to be!
Like B and L
My beautiful lily,
Like stars glow
When you get angry I feel low.
The ups of our relationship 
How we elevated,

Our love as an equation 
I can't solve x,
We fight and break 
Glasses crack and ice melts,
But we stronger than that!
You are the I in my eyes,
The apple of my eye
My right and wrong ,
But don't worry..........
Eve won't bite this apple!
No mistress can blind me from you, 
The luminous light
The illuminating truth,
My Venus, my fallen angel
I see it in your eyes,
How you have fallen for me.

Deep in the abyss 
But you shined your way through,
Seven gates mean nothing to you!
You the keys to the depths of my heart, 
Your love is the secret combination
The sacred geometry,
Nobody sees us........
How we so secretive,
You my nature I'm the native 
Civilization and modernization, 
O how I need you.

Come in! there's room
Only reserved for two,
Two times four
Now we wield the universe, 
O my Venus
Your energy excites me,
The ecstasy I'm in
The love I feel 
when I'm around you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/3/2018 1:26:00 PM
Hello Piercing Words, nice to meet you. I have enjoyed your poem. It is well written. It made me feel like i was somewhere else. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/21/2018 3:58:00 AM
Thank you very much Darlene, that's my whole mission as a writer, to invite everyone to my world: just to escape the world and its way and opening your mind to all possibilities.
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