Velvetine

give me some innocence
just a little silken touch
soft as the inside of your mouth
and slow as half frozen creeks
I want to feel every nerve ending
light up under my touch
I want to excite your senses
with the weight of this experience

this is a small bone from my neck
I want to belong to you
this is the lining of my heart
I want to be yours

and I wish
I wish I was still seventeen
and oh, how I wish
I wish we were all still velveteen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Loveless Avatar
November 14, 2013 at 7:42 AM
Ive been able to relate to this in the past. Nice work ;)
Young Avatar
November 14, 2013 at 6:52 PM
Thank you again, very nice comments! :)
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